Webnovel Author: Snow_Fox18 - Novel Collection

The world background is amazing and unique, grammer could be improved, there are a lot of terms that I still struggle to understand, but the characters are pretty well written and I do love a good fantasy!

Draft for ReWorld

Fantasy · UelUel

Snow_Fox18

8mth

Commented

This chap is a bit of an info dump, and a little hard to process, I couldn't understand most of the references and I'm still fairly confused what a world fragment is, but I like the fantasy setting and I find this pretty good so far

ch 0 2 Prologue ll - Memories Of The First World

Draft for ReWorld

Fantasy · UelUel

Snow_Fox18

8mth

Commented

Woah, I love the start! The world building is great! But grammer and punctuation could use a bit of work, but nonetheless an great start to a unique story♥️

ch 0 1 Prologue I - It all Ended

Draft for ReWorld

Fantasy · UelUel

Snow_Fox18

8mth

Posted

The story is a bit fast, characters are kinda hard to relate to, and it's hard to really get immersed in the story. I'm not gonna say much about the story because this isn't really my type of story, but it would be nice if the revenge system had a solid villain and not just vaguely saying 'people who wronged me' in the beginning and that's about it, it has potential and I know you can get better through practice!

Revenge System_X

Urban · deadpotential

Snow_Fox18

8mth

Commented

The pacing feels a bit fast, writing style is good but a little... Emotionless I guess?? Not that it's bad but it's just lacking in detail and feel that gets you into the characters and immersed in the story but so far the first cp is good

ch 0 1 A Life In A Chapter

Revenge System_X

Urban · deadpotential

Snow_Fox18

8mth

Posted

Highly recommended, writing is 10/10, plotline is intresting 10/10, story development is steady, not too fast not to slow 10/10, overall an amazing book!

The Shadow Oath

History · ToshiroOne

Snow_Fox18

8mth

Commented

Writing style is a 10/10 very descriptive, not repetitive, and is pleasantly lacking in info dumps, story development is also 10/10 not too slow and not too fast

ch 0 2 Part 2 : Outcast And The Shadow Deity

The Shadow Oath

History · ToshiroOne

Snow_Fox18

8mth

Commented

The first chapter was amazing, not usually my type of novel because of how serious it is but it's very well executed and keeps me interested. I also love how easy it is to read♥️

ch 0 1 [Vol.1] Part 1 : Outcast And The Shadow Deity

The Shadow Oath

History · ToshiroOne

Snow_Fox18

8mth

Replied to The_dark_rose14

I feel the same way 😭

ch 0 1 [Vol.1] Part 1 : Outcast And The Shadow Deity

The Shadow Oath

History · ToshiroOne

Snow_Fox18

8mth

Posted

I love everything, from wording to plot line to world building, as an author as well I could describe this book as the phrase 'read em and weep' the vocab is amazing, grammer 10/10, descriptions also 10/10 highly recommended!