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OldBone
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A4 is a paper size usually used in offices.
Jin reached his storehouse and entered from the side door. Before he proceeded to the underground floor, he created an A4 paper sign and placed it outside. "Not open in the morning for weekdays."
Number One Dungeon Supplier
Fantasy · Moloxiv
poor monsters... nochance of becoming juicy gods
"For the Goblin Dungeon Instance, it will be capped at Grade 3 and that grade will be the Extreme difficulty setting for the instance. Another example would be the next mission you will be undergoing. If you succeed in capturing the Lady Snake, you will get a Grade 2 Dungeon and the capped grade for that dungeon will be at Grade 4." Jin took in the information and started to understand how the dungeon instance mechanics worked. While it seemed simple from the start, some minor things that could enhance the experience of the customers.
Number One Dungeon Supplier
Fantasy · Moloxiv
what a typical Asian mom
"Yes Jin, your performance was below expectations," Yun said in a straight voice. "Still, you completed your mission, and I will issue you your rewards accordingly."
Number One Dungeon Supplier
Fantasy · Moloxiv
dropped
With his senses heightened from the Playful Platypus style, he was able to deduce that the goblins were tired and looking for a place to rest. If they strike now, he might have an advantage against them.
Number One Dungeon Supplier
Fantasy · Moloxiv
he can actually monopolize the energy industry
"You will never need to charge this phone ever again. The battery life is infinite, and you do not need to worry about damaging it. The screen is of top military grade and can stop a bullet. Dropping the phone from 101 floors and I can guarantee not a single scratch on it."
Number One Dungeon Supplier
Fantasy · Moloxiv
kek... weeds and cracks
"Unfortunately, there are no intact roads in the Blackmarsh Wilderness. Perhaps there's a small section of the road, originating from the Old World, that remains well-preserved along the way. It just has a lot of weeds growing on it. There are certain cracks in the road, but that's just an exception."
Embers Ad Infinitum
Sci-fi · Cuttlefish That Loves Diving
Amon had stolen time
In the blink of an eye, two months passed.
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Sci-fi · Cuttlefish That Loves Diving
if theres a 911th floor, that would be mindblowing...
"…The Entertainment Department decided to hold a staff basketball match at the Rec Center this week on their rest day…"
Embers Ad Infinitum
Sci-fi · Cuttlefish That Loves Diving
Amon and Adam's mom...
Chen Xianyu looked up. "Li Zhen. You should know her, right? You two used to be neighbors. However, you were young back then, so you might not remember. Sigh, she's also a pitiful person. She got married and had two children. Then, she was transferred to another job with her husband. She was infected and could no longer have children. Meanwhile, her two children died in an accident a few years ago…"
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Sci-fi · Cuttlefish That Loves Diving
He should pray to the King of Yellow and Black that wields good luck
Long Yuehong's lips quivered as he laughed self-deprecatingly. "I don't think I'm the chosen one, but the unlucky one."
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Sci-fi · Cuttlefish That Loves Diving
but it was also said that it supersedes the setting.
"And you've all heard the rumors that the gateway to the New World lies in the depths of a city ruins, somewhere above the Ashlands. If we never explore it, we'll never be able to enter the New World. We'll always be accompanied by famine, infection, mutation, and monsters.
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Sci-fi · Cuttlefish That Loves Diving
surprise surprise you'll see a foggy sky that conceals the Western Continent
Long Yuehong followed Shang Jianyao in silence for a while. Suddenly, he pursed his lips and softly said, "At least I can see the real sky…"
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Sci-fi · Cuttlefish That Loves Diving
more like... I applied for us
Shang Jianyao tilted his head and said, "I applied for it."
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Sci-fi · Cuttlefish That Loves Diving
This Long Yuehong is plenty annoying. please die for the plot's sake
"…" Long Yuehong waved his hand in front of Shang Jianyao. "Is there really something wrong with your brain? Don't you know how dangerous it is outside?"
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Sci-fi · Cuttlefish That Loves Diving
Yang Zhenyuan didn't know how to explain. He turned to Shang Jianyao and sighed. "I never knew marriage is such a tiring thing. However, it's still pretty good. You guys have to find a partner as soon as possible." As he spoke, he unconsciously revealed a smile.
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Sci-fi · Cuttlefish That Loves Diving
pakyu
Yang Zhenyuan's face turned red. "I've eaten. I'm just a little tired."
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Sci-fi · Cuttlefish That Loves Diving
isnt this copy-pasted.
"Do you think it's possible for her to like me? Sigh, I'm only 1.75 meters tall after genetic enhancement. My looks are average, and my grades are only average. I wasn't earmarked by any department…."
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Sci-fi · Cuttlefish That Loves Diving
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Fantasy · somerandomnoone