Webnovel Author: BadStripes - Novel Collection

Great story. I guess the only thing I didn't really like was how fast he was to realize that he got reincarnated but everything else is good.

Author's Review: The beginning is a bit shabby. It could have been better if I had the writing skills or had put more effort into it. The stability of updates is not the best, and I will sometimes do weekly uploads or daily. Depends on my mood, imagination, and motivation. Overall the updates(to me) are the worst part. I am doing my best to improve my writing skills, make things more interesting and make them make sense. I can't accurately review my world background or character design. That is for you readers to decide. Please leave feedback with your thoughts and suggestions on how I can make something better, and criticism is welcomed.

your review is much appreciated. if you have any comments or feedback about what can be edited or have any tips that would help the story out, would also mean very much. I'm open to criticism as well.

When you want to go skydiving, you want the donut go back to whale when someone thinks they feel please just want you to let you know when sometimes the heart flies they also can't catch the bug.

Very interesting. There were definitely some sentences that could've been re-worded, but I love the whole background of her being an alien and world background is simple, but it is great because a lot of people are familiar with New York, which saves you time having to describe the kind of place they are in.

I do say, if the flimper flomper had dimper domper, then that would mean skimper skomper was a swimper swomper.