Noelle_Mounce_8173 - Profile

Not sure what is worse the title or the storyline. Uuuuggghhh!!!

OMG!!! Worst syntax I've read in a while. Maybe a great storyline but if you wish to have English speaking readers this needs proofreading and editing by someone for whom English is their first language. As written the story is horribly awkward and difficult to read. I just can't read this.

This kind of cuckoo is a learned response. While the intrigues me the amount of chapters in insane and worse there are some that are privilege locked. So based on that I will read the available free chapters and then move on. While I understand the author does this to earn revenue I can purchase a completed best seller on Kindle for a fraction of the cost of this novel here. Some may opt for reading here but avid readers will not it's to expensive.

Thank you for your response. I'm old school and have bought hard cover new releases for less than the total chapters price here. I know you don't control chapter length or cost but the amount of chapters and total cost can be off-putting. Any way to annotate when a new book in the series is starting. It would be helpful to know and add value. 😁

Enjoying the storyline 31 chapters in. The catch, today as I checked it there are 934 chapters plus those in privileged reader membership. So NOT a SHORT story by any means. It's good but be prepared to spend a small fortune or if you have patience use the points or daily fast passes to read it.

I don't think we are on the same page. My thought that it was a bit meanspirited to think of thirty years as old. Prime of life perhaps but certainly not old. Heaven forbid what is 45,55, or even 65 years old? LOL

Oh my gosh!!! The nurse is in her thirties and Kelly will look like her when she's old???

Oh, he can't add. He definitely needs to go back to school and finish his education. Her scent and his wolf calling her "Mate". Marcy said she's known her her whole life and called her "Naomi", duh??? Can we say dense?

Not exactly logical storyline here. Her constituents are going to believe the invader who has slaughtered them over the princess that cared for them during her reign.

Enjoying this read. Intriguing storyline, characters could use a little more fleshing out but the English translation is very good.

Apparently the words "CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM" do not exist in your native language. Still advice from a editor/proofreader IF you want to appeal to native English speaking readers take those comments to heart.

Loving this. Beautifully written.

Different storyline. Dialogue is a bit.... simple-minded/lame.

Interesting storyline. Writing not so much. Too frequent spelling errors and poor syntax. Hard to read. Would improve with good editing proofreading.