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I agree with your statement and it is valid but there is a point in the first arc where one of the MLS attempts to kill himself. I feel like at that point she should have cut him off completely and stayed away as she was being very harmful to him who is barely even an adult. (of course there is also something wrong with him if you look at the reason why he wanted to off himself) one of my other problems with her is she comes off as a little bit of a pedophile later on in the first arc when she gets interested in student of one of the male leads college. this could just be an error of translation though as she is not talking about a minor but she does say that she likes little boys. (and she's talking about age) all this to say that I do agree that they were wrong in how they treated the OG and they should suffer a bit and I would of liked the story if that was all. for me I think that the attempt at suicide and the pedophile thing are things that i can't look past.
its a nice story I guess, I was only able to read until the first arc and then I dropped it. The supporting characters are nice I just can't get over my dislike for the FL. I know the author said she wasn't a good person but I honestly wasn't expecting her character to be this unlikable. she doesn't view any of the male leads as people and when one of the male leads attempted suicide she didn't care one bit. people are saying she's cool and savage- no she's just a completely awful person. if she was a male mc instead of female I guarantee she would not be called cool.
I’m glad you enjoyed the story!
Thank you for the advice! I will try to apply it to my next book ;)
The writing is very descriptive it gives a creepy feeling, which is very fitting for this book! I like how the first chapter is very long because it gives a nice introduction to the story.
The story is nice, at the beginning the punctuation was kind of not that great as well as the grammar. What is nice is that the auth looks at the points he needs to work on and gradually improves. the author listens to the readers advice which is always nice. Keep working hard!
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Great work!
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Your welcome rather I should be thanking you for making such an awesome book!
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This story is about a girl who struggles with life. Someone who self harms and has suicidal ideation. Someone who wants to die really bad, can she find meaning in her life? Note that this covers topics that are sensitive to some people. Also I’m not recommending or in anyway encouraging self harm. Self harm can lead to dangerous things and can lead to things you wouldn’t expect. (Cover belongs to me)33 Chs 10 Collections
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This content might not be your cup of tea. Please don’t give me a nasty review and instead just ignore my book and move on to something else. People trying to survive people getting tortured that’s what this book is about. Come along on a journey to see people getting betrayed people getting killed and people getting abused. (Cover belongs to me)13 Chs 5 Collections
I love this book and it's actually one of the few books on here that persuaded me to unlock the chapters using coins. the writing quality is great and the characters are fleshed out. The main character, Riven is so lovable and likable and I love the whole thing with his tail and ears. the story draws you in right away and you can't help wanting to read more. I just hope that if there is only one ml going to at the end that it'll be soran, or at least not Roan (kinda forgot his name) but keep up the great work author ♡
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