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_Queen_A
female LV 11The journey of a thousand miles begins with a step, that's what they say. Well, guess what... I'm taking steps...鉁岋笍 See you at the end of the road馃し馃徏馃榿
2021-10-02 Joined NigeriaBadges 15
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I'm not upset. I like someone who can note a flaw and do it as nicely as you're doing.It helps me improve on my writing馃槉 And yes, do check in my other novels. But do give me a heads up on the one you will choose to read next. Because I can tell you about one particular novel of mine with extreme flaws. Even I sometimes wonder how I ever wrote that particular novel 馃槀馃槀馃槀
" But I want to tell you, I think I'll be right" he still nods a no, trying not to smile like a lovestruck bunny.聽
DEVIOUS YOU, NAIVE ME
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Noted
" But I want to tell you, I think I'll be right" he still nods a no, trying not to smile like a lovestruck bunny.聽
DEVIOUS YOU, NAIVE ME
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Alright you got me馃檭
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Thank you!I'll definitely pick a month for editing. There are lots of errors in this one, apart from the wrong names, there are also improper use of punctuations that I do need to correct.I'll work on it馃槉
"Please, Mr King, just this once, just this one time, forgive me, don't make me fish food. Please I beg you.
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It is, eavesdropping. My bad. Thanks again 馃槀
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Even with all the flaws. Thank you!
"Please, Mr King, just this once, just this one time, forgive me, don't make me fish food. Please I beg you.
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Oh God, open the eyes of this writer!馃槶Sorry my dear reader!
"What's wrong? David King asks as he was expecting a swooping hug from his son.
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馃ぃ How are you catching these mistakes!Again, thank you for nicely picking them out.I think I'll have to dedicate an entire month to edit the entire novel馃槀 It has so many flaws.But I'll correct this one right away.
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And also, pls don't feel wronged when u find out ur comment is deleted. As long as I edit a paragraph, the comments under it are automatically deleted by the site.Thank you for the corrections, I always welcome them.馃檹馃槉
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馃槀Sorry, I shouldn't be laughing but I can sincerely feel your frustration from your words.I'm truly sorry for the mistake. I was writing two different novels at the time I wrote this one. Vanessa was from the other novel.Forgive my lack of proper proofreading.
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Oh, my bad!Thanks for noticing. I'll change it now. 馃槉
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Thank you 馃槉
ch 200 200. DEVIOUS YOU, NAIVE ME...
DEVIOUS YOU, NAIVE ME
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I'm glad you like it.馃槉And I do hope to see more of you馃檹馃槉
See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola
ch 0 1 Chapter One_Kiss Me
One Night Stand With The Heiress In Disguise
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See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola
ch 0 1 Chapter One_Kiss Me
One Night Stand With The Heiress In Disguise
Urban 路 EllenHasyChiny
See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola
ch 0 1 Rebirth
REBIRTH AND REVENGE
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See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola
ch 0 1 Rebirth
REBIRTH AND REVENGE
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I support you on this!馃
ch 103 103. See you in another world.
Cloaked in an Enigma
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On
" But I want to tell you, I think I'll be right" he still nods a no, trying not to smile like a lovestruck bunny.聽
DEVIOUS YOU, NAIVE ME
Urban 路 _Queen_A