Hey author i really like your story....but if one thing that i would nitpick about in the latest chapter would be jon arryn is not supposed to hire assassins, he is an honorable man, even ned stark who is famous for his honor, learnt it from jon arryn...well it really doesn't matter anyway it's your story it can be a little AU
ch 58 Chapter 58
Book&Literature · Fangrove
amen
What a time to be alive! I can make good old Skyrim into some Korean MMO if I wanted to. But there is an unwritten rule when it comes to modding Skyrim, it is "Before looks, comes immersion". That is what our Lord and Savior 'The Immersive Lord MxR' taught us.
Video Games · El_Don
When I first read the synopsis I was happy, as it is rare to find a book where the MC is not either dicking around with diff girls or being hella overpowered. But well it disappointed me, the first 4 chapters of yours they are very boring. I do know that you might have wanted to explain the world's background but you could've taken a diff approach. All I am trying to say even though your story might be amazing or the idea behind is amazing, the way you put it in the words was a little Disappointing.
GREED: ALL FOR WHAT?
Fantasy · DMadLord