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Great chapter thanks

The fact that Jace is with his mother seems interesting to me along with the dance of the dragons at the end the insect is in Targaryen blood

I wanted to ask if if Thorfinn became king or if you would follow the Vikings canon that would change the story a lot

Gerald style magic from Rivia the Witcher would be fine with all the monsters and it would be fine if there were hunters from the church and other organizations great chapter

It would be good for him to learn a little about everything but I don't see medicine as very important when he becomes a werewolf or vampire he will have regeneration so it shouldn't be a priority.

I am reading this novel with Brazilian phonk I hope everyone reads it as it should be

I have seen that there are many confidants in person, 5 like the politician, even the one from the weapons store, will they all be in the novel? And another thing I noticed is that they give skills depending on the level, will that also be seen in the novel? Or it will simply be a relationship of friendship and love, thank you very much for the chapter.

I noticed that in this novel most of the characters' dialogues are very robotic for them to be children, it would be good to have simpler dialogues between the characters to make it more natural.

Kira and L's relationship is great and you can feel the tension in the conversation. Now I hope for a little more romance. It left us with expectations after the girls' last conversation.

Great chapter, these types of chapters are great for the end of each villain and it would be good to see how society takes them more seriously with each passing chapter.

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Great chapter

A question author, how many girls will be part of the harem? I hope there aren't too many, that usually ruins the stories.

Thanks for the chapter

I hope that with technology they don't change the magical world of Harry Potter too much and it's just about everyday life and not about weapons and stuff.

Author Hermione will be in the harem I ask because many people don't like the character very much and I very much hope so