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The overall story is nice and interesting but one thing you could take note of are the very small grammatical errors that could be taken care of if you read through your chapter before posting it

You are good with words and the story flow so far is good so I really can’t form a strong opinion on the story as I’ve just upto them third chapter so I’ll give it a 4.4 for the storyline and wording

It is a nice story. Interesting so far I’ve read till the fifth chapter as I give this review but I feel like it could be better in terms of the story construction but the idea and wording is really good. You guys should give it a chance it is nice

thank you

thank you for the review

thank you for the review actually the poems are just for the prologue part from chapter 1 the story will start

Actually maybe it was because am not that big of a fan of action or superhero novels and haven’t read that much stories on them but what was really amusing for me was the fact a six year old kid or was it seven talked like that and the naive ness of the brother and but so far this story is interesting and has a lot of potential to be very good and am hoping it’s gets better with every chapter but so far so good

It is a really very interesting story and i have liked it so far from what I have read but the only problem that I have are the paragraphs like i feel like for me long paragraphs they make me want to skip them like not because they are not interesting it because most of them are just explanations of the areas like in chapter 1 about the market place but overall shi the protagonist seems inretesting and am looking foward to her character growing into a true hunter and the special being that she is