/ Teen / Always loving you
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A little sneak peak on the prologue:
Today,
You smiled, not to me , to her
You kissed not me but her
You held hands
You carried her
You whispered to her
You goofed around with her
You hugged her
Your eyes shone when you talked to or about her
You were happy
I noticed happy for you was her
The breaking point for me is our eyes never did meet
I knew I lost you
Funny thing is how you were never mine to begin with
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I... I don't know what to say. Maybe I'm too early?? Because... For now, it's just three chapters of prologue, and those three prologues are just poems. Quite strange, honestly, and I don't know how to react... I'm not sure what the story will look like exactly, so, here's my early review... Nice poem tho...
Just to be safe, I decided to give it a 4.6/5. It's a brand new webnovel, but it shows quite the promise with it's first three chapters. Please read it.
One chapter so far but it was quite the interesting start. Never really seen a novel start with a poem before, looking forward for more to come, seems like it will be an interesting romance.
I can't score you higher because I have no idea what's going on. I don't know If the characters dead or not and I can't orientate myself in time or space because I have no context for what's going on. Three chapters of prologue is a lot, I'd combine them into one chapter. I'd focus more on the characters than the poetry
I don't know for sure if the early chapter/prologue are like poem its. quite strange, don't know what to say on this review, and still unclear of what is the story but leave this early review for now i might change it along the way.