'Eorlund Gray-Mane, prepare to have your ass kissed,' I mused as I began sketching designs for the tools I needed.
Forged in Skyrim
Video Games · Wicked132
I agree. It's why im rewriting it for the umpteenth time and making sure I actually like it before putting it out again.
I never make reviews, but this fic makes me feel some type of way. the idea and concept are amazing, but the problem is the MC. Not because they are edgy or saving anyone but because they are basically a background character. From chapters 25 to 34, they weren't even in the story and were just a retelling of the anime with some slight changes. Now, if the chapters were longer, it would be completely fine, but each chapter barely feels like two thousand words, and I easily glide through them. There are also a lot of grammatical issues, such as the constant repeating of the same word or the sentences not making sense. though grammar can be fixed with time, and i hope it does. I obviously dont expect perfection since it's a fanfic, but you can't have the MC be a background character and have such short chapters at the same time.
how is this even on here
"Fellow Daoist." Ocean Song forced a smile. "Please…unfuck us."
Monster? No, I'm a Cultivator! (Percy Jackson)
Book&Literature · AStoryForOne
I know this comment was a while ago but I thought Falco liked kiwi
Suddenly, David was roaring out of the garage, able to see Falco in the rearview, looking as if someone just ran away with the love of his life.
Cyberpunk Edgerunners: Nanites SON!
Anime & Comics · BeaulenSmith2
yeah and that's because I feel as though the Navi have a lot to offer but there wasn't much to do when I should have probably made it two chapters
"I do apologize for dropping by so abruptly, but I wanted to inform the plains' leading clan of my arrival about my quick hunting trip throughout the territory," I say with a respectful yet slightly rushed tone.
Lord of the Seas
Video Games · Some_creative_name
that actually would have been a better idea
"well, my species doesn't really originate from anywhere as we don't stay in one place and explore around the world to see what we can. Also after we are born we practically fend for ourselves" I say with fake sadness and hoping my lie works.
Lord of the Seas
Video Games · Some_creative_name
it's a fan design
fair enough
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original The Untamed Guide to Heroics (and Property Damage)
After dying (again) and being resurrected (again) by an indifferent eldritch god named Thul’zath, a snarky, shapeshifting anomaly named Tenka Henshin gets dumped into the My Hero Academia universe—except UA is a university, everyone’s eighteen, and Mineta has mysteriously vanished (good riddance). Through it all, Tenka grins like a gremlin, morphs like a horror movie, and baffles everyone—from Aizawa’s exhausted sighs to Kirishima’s whiplash between calling him "manly" and wanting to punch him. The Verdict So Far: UA is not prepared and the League of Villains should start running.1 Chs 26 Collections
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Submerged Abyss
Cover belongs to Luna Gamer on Pinterest. While all characters besides those I created belong to the original creators as well as all pictures I use for reference. Cameron wakes up to find himself in an unimaginable situation—reborn as a shark in the vast, mysterious world of Subnautica. He must quickly adapt to his new body if he wants to survive the dangers lurking beneath the ocean's surface. With no memory of how he arrived, Cameron must learn to navigate the treacherous waters, while battling both the creatures of the ocean he once knew as a game and the harsh environment. Faced with the choice to embrace his new life as an apex predator or seek a way back to his old existence, Cameron must adapt, survive, and unravel the mysteries of his rebirth in a world where every move could be his last.6 Chs 173 Collections
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Lord of the Seas
I don't own anything in this story besides the personality's of the characters and my mc there is a being born of chaos and order. a pure anomaly of existence, of reality no matter the universe or world he is a singular being with no duplicates or Doppelgangers. This is his story of endless adventure to find his purpose and understanding of the universe.56 Chs 1.8k Collections
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Werewolfs Pride
A teenager reborn after being tragically killed and transmigrated in a world filled with titans with the new power of a werewolf and a system guiding him on increasing his strength and powers as he experiences what it is like being in times without modern technology or being human. P.S. The cover is not mine and belongs to ThemeFinland on Deviant art also this is what the MC's Werewolf form looks like2 Chs 44 Collections
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The Oni's Rise
After a strange meeting with a Dwarf and his butt-biting cat, our main character is thrown into a world he has yet to understand. He wonders if accepting this was indeed a good idea but also accepts that this might have been the best decision of his life. Though he always thinks his choice may have been greedy, he wonders how his family and friends are doing. So, let's see how this story goes, don't you say? I own nothing but my characters. The creators of these original stories own everything, so please don't get mad at me.1 Chs 7 Collections
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Exploration f Worlds
A story of a young boy going through trials of life and death until he reaches the peak of all worlds. This is not my cover and if you own it I will take it down if you want me to.6 Chs 3 Collections
I felt delirious.
Godzilla: The Sky King (Rayquaza SI)
Movies · ruijard1