Isn't it better like this? A slow pace that establishes the foundations of a story with good characters that allow you to empathize with them. This site is full of novels with flat, boring and annoying characters, I like how this webnovel develops for now.
ch 12 Chapter 12
Anime & Comics · ChaosOfDeity
Good chapter, I like the dichotomy of the MC, he is an immature young man, but at the same time experienced, although he never lived these experiences, they allow him to know himself and know what he wants and what he needs in a way that a teenager could not. He knows how to analyze his surroundings and read the situation. He is quite an interesting character.
ch 48 Chapter 47
Anime & Comics · AStoryForOne
I did not like how the romance with Artoria was approached, it came out of nowhere, they have known each other for practically nothing, it seems that the MC only takes advantage of lonely women. I'm not against a well-built harem, but I found it too sudden. Too bad I was liking the novel.
ch 41 Chapter 40
Anime & Comics · AStoryForOne
He has the experiences of zelretch, but he is still a 17 year old. He is mature and at the same time not. He knows how to get along in the world, but sometimes he is reckless. He is also aware of his shortcomings and always seeks to improve. English is not my first language by the way.
A Nascent Kaleidoscope.
Anime & Comics · AStoryForOne