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Wkoya
Hello! I have the second chapter finished, but I figured I would upload each chapter at a scheduled time. I intend to have each chapter be at least 1k words, and will probably release 5 per week. Any feedback is welcome, so I know what to keep and what to improve, but it'll be hard to take things into consideration if you use insults instead of actually telling me what stuff you disliked, so keep that in mind. I hope y'all enjoy reading and experiencing this story!
Wkoya
Heads up, this is gonna be one of the few parts in the entire story that I will ever mention certain features, since I don't want to go down that path.
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The Harmony of Redemption
Fantasy · Wkoya
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original The Harmony of Redemption
Yoka Songra is a beautiful but sharp fox spirit who, one day, faces an unexpected foe. She tried her best to defeat them, but is cast off a broken bridge, losing her memories in the process. Now it is up to her to fix what she lost, and tackle the many mysteries surrounding her past, present, and future. Along the way she will meet many friends, from strange to wholesome, as well as enemies she never thought possible, with the hope that one day, peace may come. Hope you enjoy! {Hi, this is the failed project I had worked on but stopped after I realized I needed to do much more preparations and actually enjoy myself while writing. Let this stand as a reminder or what not to do.}9 Chs 2 Collections
Just started reading, overall good work. I don't really see the reason behind the game aspect of it though. As far as I can tell it doesn't seem to have a purpose except to connect to a larger audience. As well as the main character going into detail about stuff a game would usually not have. This opinion may change later on, we will see. If it doesn't I'll just pretend it has nothing to do with a game. I like the attention to detail, and how most of the technology has an explanation behind it, instead of saying "it was very advanced technology." The main character seems trope heavy but interesting nonetheless. Keep up the good work.
Ravens of Eternity
Sci-fi · CeritusOrbis