Just another avid fan of fanfiction
2021-10-23 Joined Norway
Haha, was it too much of an info dump maybe? I'll look into it and try to be more concise with my writing. Thanks for the comment :)
ch 0 2 Seirai Island
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Again, my memory isn't my strong suit, but If it isn't failing me I think it had something to do with the difference in time. The first time (when Subaru was one-shot) it was late at night and for some reason she was in a hurry (can't remember why though). The second time they "fought" it was way earlier during the evening or something, and she wasn't in a hurry? I'm gonna be totally honest, my memory is pretty bad. Like goldfish-memory bad... If my explanation ringed any bells then great if not then everything I said may be complete bs :) (lol)
'If it weren't for some being "cursing" me I would've actually died.' Shuddering at the realization, I tried to think of something else to take my mind off it.
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It sounds like an interesting concept, but that would mean I'd have to rewrite the whole story. I'll keep it in mind if I decide to rewrite. As it is now, I'd rather keep going with what I'm doing with minor tweaks than to start from scratch. I am but an inexperienced and newbie author, even if I decided to rewrite because I didn't like something at the beginning, I'd still make similar mistakes as a result of my inexperience.
ch 0 9 Need opinions
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I get what you're saying, but Mc still has the mindset of his previous world. He doesn't really know what he's doing, but I'm planning to temper his will a little and make him face reality. Then he'll have no choice but to train himself. Also as I keep saying, just because mc's stats are higher than Subaru, without knowing the situation he's walking into ofc he'll die pathetically. He's up against an assassin, and he has no CQC experience or anything of the sort. Only raw stats
ch 0 7 Name at the end
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I thought so too, but don't really remember.
ch 0 9 Need opinions
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I already had someone in mind, but I'll consider it and perhaps post a vote sometime in the future.
ch 0 9 Need opinions
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If my memories aren't failing me he was basically one-shot during their first encounter. Although I see your point, having higher base stats than Subaru doesn't really matter in this case. It was dark, he couldn't see anything. He has no training in CQC, or anything of the sort. He wasn't expecting an ambush either. Also, Elsa is an assassin and therefore she thrives in a dark environment. Lastly, Elsa is freakishly strong. She was moving fast enough that she was just a blur when fighting Reinhard. If you are still not happy with my reasoning I can't really do anything about it. In my opinion, the mc had no shot at survival in this situation.
'If it weren't for some being "cursing" me I would've actually died.' Shuddering at the realization, I tried to think of something else to take my mind off it.
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'Cute' "Cute" I could see her ears reddening. Oh, I did it again.
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I'll consider it when I'm feeling better馃憤
(A/N: As I didn't remember much from the start of the show I started re-watching re:zero from the start, and then I realized. I messed up Subaru's stats in the beginning. Should I edit the chapter or just leave it? For some reason, I thought he was pretty weak physically at the start of the series, but it seems he was in pretty good shape, even going as far as to get a compliment from puck馃槀.)
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That would defeat the point. I'm writing this fic to improve my writing in general and as a hobby. I could arguably also add pictures, but I'm lazy :)
Standing up I see three thug-looking guys. One was small with an orange bob cut and weirdly dilated eyes. Beside him stood a skinny-looking guy with bushy gray hair with some lines being pink, wearing what looked to be a collar with a chain equipped. Furthest to the right was a round-looking guy wearing something resembling bandages on his head (my explanations suck so deal with it lol)
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Yup. It was my mistake, but I'll just roll with it
'God dammit Subaru, how come you are under average in everything except INT?' Feeling rather depressed after looking over the stats my eyes froze on a certain stat.
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Ik what you mean. Subarus fragile stats aside, it was dark and he couldn't see anything. And Elsa is freakish strong by herself. Idk bout you, but I can't see myself surviving that situation. Especially going in blind, both figuratively and literally.
ch 0 7 Name at the end
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I don't really get it, but thanks for the review?馃槀
I'll take that into consideration too馃槀
Ehrm. Was supposed to be MP. Probably a bunch of MS running around all over the place. I'll try to fix it wherever I see it :) thanks for the heads-up!
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Mc is just gaining his bearings, and is currently located in Inazuma... But who knows what'll happen in the future馃
ch 0 3 Nihility
Pathstrider in Teyvat (Genshin fic)
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