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His teacher wasn't actually a master, he could only teach him so much and even that doesn't cover everything. You can think of it as someone who only learned martial arts to the intermediate level teaching someone else. You can only really cover the basics. The main goal is to show depict or hint at the supernatural elements that exist within the story. These start to ramp up closer to the end of book 1 and in the later planned books, its an incremental growth.

"Focus child, the energy you feel is the natural energies of the world around us. Our bodies and all living things naturally absorb this energy, prana is what the ancient temple masters call this power. You must focus on your cores, one located at the center of your chest, and the other at the base of the neck." Vishnamitra made certain to press his fingers on these points, helping his disciple to better visualize the cores present within his body. These two cores, the central and mind cores, were present naturally in all living things, with more being created as one stepped further onto the path of enlightenment.

Lineage Saga

Lineage Saga

Fantasy · Shaun_Raja

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Thanks, glad to see that you are enjoying the story.

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Lineage Saga

Lineage Saga

Fantasy · Shaun_Raja

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Hello Everyone, It is obvious that my own personal review as the author will be biased and I didn't really want to do this, but I would like to use this to encourage to review this work. However, I honestly believe this is one of my best works and I have spent months refining the initial story, designing the economic systems, cultural diversities, using research of ancient civilizations as the basis of research. I personally do not like the one man army trope, that is why I enjoy mixing tactical combat and more logical approaches to war which is reflected within the story. Tactics used and the technologies present in the initial stages of this series do have some mention in ancient history, with some minor modifications at times. Magic or supernatural elements are present, but they do not make immediate appearance and are hinted at earlier in the story. It's evolution you will have to witness yourself as I do not wish to spoil anything. As for the characters, I truly believe this one of the strongest areas within the story when excluding combat. Characters are individuals, they have personalities, they act differently based on the scenario and will change with events occurring within the series. There are a handful of slightly more important characters, but for the most part ALL characters have value, that also means plot armor will be minimal at best. Word of warning. I will promise at least 4 chapter releases per week, Mon-Thurs EST. Depending on how quickly I am adding to my buffer, I may be able to release additional chapters each week. At most you will get a chapter a day, for 7 chapters a week, which is only possible if I am able to write a chapter each day to add to my buffer. Other than that I believe this is a story that you should definitely explore. What I would ask, if you have read up to this point, then if you could leave a review I would appreciate it. I want to know your thoughts and how I can improve upon my story. So, when you get to chapter 10 or somewhere further along, whenever you believe you have seen enough to provide constructive criticism, I would appreciate that.

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