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vionltron
LV 1I like novels and I want to try writing something.
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Thank you for your critique, I must say you are absolutely right. I intentionally included many cliches in the first two chapters. Originality starts from chapter 3... But yes, there are cliches, and I'm trying to have some fun with them. However, there will be fewer of them in the future.
Thank you, it’s nice to read that
ch 18 Chapter 18 : The Need to Choose a Task?
Naruto: Under the Banner of the Clans
Anime & Comics · vionltron
It was at five during the era just before Konoha, but I never said we were in that era... It will be explained later
Like all Uchiha children, the age of ten held an extremely important meaning - adulthood. Since the clan was in constant warfare with others, especially with the Senju clan, children of ten were already considered adults who could join the front lines.
Naruto: Under the Banner of the Clans
Anime & Comics · vionltron
So, I admit that wasn't it originally... Actually, I don't remember anymore what I wanted to say... From what I recall, it had something to do with darkness and scarlet.
In the ninja world, those with nicknames were all exceptional, and before them stood the Uchiha ninja known as "Hiiro no yūgure" due to his unique Sharingan power.
Naruto: Under the Banner of the Clans
Anime & Comics · vionltron
Thank you, and sorry for the pace of chapter updates. Studies take up the majority of my time, and I can't be as regular.
Naruto: Under the Banner of the Clans
Anime & Comics · vionltron