Could someone tell me in which chapter Sarah and Joel meet again?
Could someone tell me in which chapter Sarah and Joel meet again?
Could someone tell me in which chapter Sarah and Joel meet again?
Don't even bother reading this FF, the ending is terrible.
ch 32 31. Macready and a Lead To Shaun
Video Games · Tang12
Did his life move you? So what about those who live worse than the MC, be more realistic and just say that he is their guardian angel and was randomly selected to change the world or something like that.
ch 0 1 The Monotonous Life
Sci-fi · Faux1231
Mc too perfect, romance too fast, no character development, terrible, honestly I only read this because of the ff topic, which is about game development
ch 0 7 Alice: You Have Me, So Don't Find Other Girls
Games · ShadowKatake
Did I develop another personality due to some trauma?
ch 121 Ch.120 Farewell(3)
Anime & Comics · youareme
Too many cliche tropes, how can you know by instinct that you can override your will to reality? Has no sense
ch 0 3 Ch.3 Phychic powers(Edited)
Anime & Comics · youareme
He said he felt the weight of his actions and the political problems there about a dozen times, he literally says it every two paragraphs, it's getting annoying. It is enough for me to say it only once and not throughout the entire chapter as in the previous one, if the rest of the chapters are like that, I will abandon it. Seriously, it's not that I want to give bad comments or be a hater, but this ruins the entire FF, I ask you to please seriously reflect on what you are writing.
ch 32 31. Macready and a Lead To Shaun
Video Games · Tang12
Those dialogues are terribly forced, Marla just needed to be told go away and she began to question all her actions and she simply left, there was no conversation at all, I sincerely recommend that you relate the surroundings, the reactions and possible thoughts, do not do it as if they dialogues were from a video game, it takes away the realistic feeling of the story. That is my recommendation since the FF is very good and promising but those errors take away points that would otherwise be favorable.
ch 23 22. Nick Valentine
Video Games · Tang12
Approximately what chapter would it be?
Surviving The Last Of Us World
Video Games · kibishi718