Sigh! Problem here is that he's good to his wife just to get experience. Before he got the system, he didn't even think of doing what he's doing now. It feels like if he got another way to efficiently gain experience, then he would just ignore his wife. It's just disgusting. I noticed other CN novels like that too. They systemize the relationships and offer rewards for pure emotions, completely dissociating feelings from the MC. He just feels like a level up machine.
Chen An was slightly excited. Then, he continued to be a bootlicker to his wife. He wanted to suck up to her in various ways and improve their relationship as much as possible.
Eastern · Little Overlord From Bamboo City
Regarding other questionable things. MC remembered previous body owner falling down in one paragraph and next paragraph it's how noah would tell mom that her son is dead, this makes us readers think he died cuz he fell over a rock. You could've just added "6 year old long tian fell. .. etc" and "14 year old long tian" to make us know that that memory had nothing to do with his thoughts about telling mom.
'It seems you are really courting death! Just wait, you will die a dog's death under my hands. That bitch will also kneel before me and beg for my forgiveness.'
Eastern · Odayaka
dropped at chapter 7
I can't take this sound effect seriously
Haha, I admit I went overboard about the characters changing, I just thought it was too fast of a change from a reader pov, while for them, they experienced the changes. So I just wanted more interactions of them in the process of changing. example: arrogant sadistic guy not caring about anyone except fiance > same guy but shows positive emotions and care > same guy now acting on his emotions and getting closer to others > same guy but now he's a meathead and puppy You skipped the middle parts of the changes. Anyway, I really enjoyed your novel, despite being new to writing, you honestly just captured what people want to see in a story. You have all the elements to making a great story here. You improved overtime and the story got better. Now you could just get better at world building and you'd be one of the top authors.
Reborn as an Extra
Sci-fi · Calm_Mountains