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I must say it is very entertaining and it's a funny story to have a laugh at and skip time. There were some issues with paragraphs being doubled which the author fixed after the initial comment. But overall, it's excellent, and I would recommend it plus, it has a unique cultivation system.

I got introduced to this novel from your insta story. First of all your character design, development is great it's just your writing quality which I can definitely see it being improved in the second chapter which shows that you're getting better and better. Keep it up. I'll follow if it does update regularly.