Webnovel Author: Hentai_Master_6907 - Fanfic Collection

Finally! After so many years I found a well written fanfic where Mordred is the main heroine! This novel is definitely feast for Mordred fans like myself. PS. Morderd is without a doubt best girl. Anyone who disagrees can fight me.

This novel is really well written. The author fixed some of Bleach's biggest problems, namely its shaky world-building and its numerous plot holes. However, it seems like something important is missing. This novel seems to be written in a very logical way, which has its upsides but sadly may as well be its biggest weakness as it takes away the zaniness away which is a big part of Bleach and also a big reason why many fans love it. Really seems like the author is not really good at being zany and it really shows at times. The plot unfolds in a very logical way but that also makes it much more boring than it could have been. Not only does the story suffer from it but also the comedy, as the jokes were rarely able to land. I would really recommend the author to be more spontaneous and not be too obsessed with logic. Please remember dear author, the logical way isn't automatically the right way. I hope my review was helpful