This book is great, I like how the MC development is going but my honest opinion is if you’re able to go back and edit the small errors in the grammar and add a little more detail to the world-building for example like the settings where the characters are at the moment, I think that would boost this book to a whole new level besides that you’re doing great and can’t wait for more chapters to come out
Fantasy · Zetronys
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This book is great, I like how the MC development is going but my honest opinion is if you’re able to go back and edit the small errors in the grammar and add a little more detail to the world-building for example like the settings where the characters are at the moment, I think that would boost this book to a whole new level besides that you’re doing great and can’t wait for more chapters to come out
the monarch
Fantasy · Zetronys