Webnovel Author: suffix0 - Fanfic Collection

how can he be undecided about western medicine ? this is so dumb. ayurveda is not an alternative path. it mostly talks about prevention. and more then that, it uses old concepts like 4 fundamental elements etc. ayurveda is an ancient part of our history and has recorded some health benefits from plants and a way of life. that's it. western medicine is taking the plant and isolating the beneficial agent, then reproduceing and improveing upon it. it took years of countless people hardwork to achieve it. it's about so much more. as vijay was a scientist, he should have no doubt about it. but this is a rightwing story, I get it . "india gave the world ayurveda and no one ever thought about eating random herbs to cure headache" so either keep both parallel or go full western and write how you convinced 16th century Indians remember, current india has it parallel and lot of people died during COVID because they trusted Ram Dev's Coronil. they even die now because people try to cure diabetes with ayurvedic treatment. God I hate the ministry of Ayush

maybe after 6 more policies and civil projects, a bridge maybe ? 🤔

it's really funny how the author made it so that vijay was a scientist at ISRO before reincarnating it has been years in the story but there have been no real science except making buildings and laws. anything science related is delegated to others to build. I know these are necessary as well but then why make him an ISRO scientist? now my head cannon is vijay must have been from a political family who did civil engineering btech, then got in ISRO via 'connections'.

this is very common in new writers so it's ok. here Vijay is the author self insert so to speak. so 'what i believe is the right way ' thinking it's very prevalent. it is very hard to write characters and their interactions. I know from writing a story of my own. what I found that really helps is reading stories with characters povs

According to the story, Vijay was from ISRO not PWD 😂 why is he so fixated on buildings ? industrialization should be his dream as a scientist not a new capital. the scientific method and mindset was the first step for it. this separated superstition from actual fact based thinking, spreading this should be Vijay's top most priority. because no matter how many schools you make, it will be useless if no new freethinkers arise. (this will go against superstitions and tradition so it may itch the right wing the wrong way ) . it's in the 1650s so such thinking started in Europe around the same time . the 'i think therefore I am ' started in 1600s as well.on another note atleast wait for steel to be produced before making big projects. if you know you will have a wonder material for buildings soon, why not wait ?

keep it up author! good job what I find funny is that people here have different priorities then me. they don't want to see an ancient India quickly advancing in technology and bring wonders to the world no no , they want to see akhand Bharat. the real issue is even if vijay defeats the Mughals, he will have to attack other kingdoms in East (I know author's brain will tell that the kingdoms accepted to be under vijay's empire because of his promise of akhand Bharat but thats illogical as vijay's modern reforms means the monarchy has to go=fight and ofcourse different cultures) at the end of the day vijay will just become like Alexander and keep conquering lands through blood and superior tech not because of necessity but because of an ideal dream of 'Akhand Bharat'. he then will put puppet 'princely states' in faraway lands as Myanmar. so at the end of the day vijay will be no different the the British colonizers. if someone says india will not be as bad as the colonizers then think again, it's 17th century india here not modern westernized india. ofcourse author didn't think this through so let me help. just write the British conquered the whole east Indian subcontinent as vijay was busy with Mughals. then vijay will just defeat the British and 'save' the east and finally become 'akhand Bharat'. problem solved.

this narrative is really pushing it I believe. this is a "lived happily ever after" type of story. there is a reason why monotheistic religions are monotheistic. they have a proper head and leaders who decide what is right and wrong. They decide what to accept and not. Some stone in a cave that disproves their religion will not just be accepted by anyone. And as for the Muslim population, Vijay has arrested thousands of them so the Muslim population will be more on guard with Vijay and will not trust his empire at all, some may even approach Mughals as they feel threatened. the rightwing thinking here is "these abrahamic religions are bad, let me fix it for them and then spread it so thay can be more integrated to the dharmic ways and not collude with outside muslims and Christians. "this is a flawed conclusion that seems logical at first but it flawed none the less.the left-wing answer here is "to follow the Bangladesh model. people chose Bengali over urdu of islam and even went to a war over their culture and language. so to make sure muslims and Christians of my land don't collude with outside forces, integration was a must. this will include people working together regardless of religion. this might include propaganda as festivals , books and songs . intermarriage was also common in this era. over time a mix of cultures would be formed . eg- Nur Jaha ruled a Muslim kingdom being a women. this would not be possible in middle East. over a thousand years both Hindus and Muslim interaction has changed both cultures. that is why Hindus in North got so different then Hindus from south. one is a mix while other is a control. " ask yourself why diversity is strength for the USA while the same diversity is ripping india apart.ps- I say I am a middle man but this time I have to go with left as the rightwing option is so stupid. sorry (⁠｡⁠•́⁠︿⁠•̀⁠｡⁠)

yes, it is the truth. FACT.- I agree with you. but what now? what do we do now? kill all non Hindus ? make them slaves ? deport them to Pakistan? or work to improve our lives after so many years of conquest. US has advanced so much because of diversity but the same diversity has been a hurdle for us sadly.

middle. someone who wants everyone to live together in peace. and also someone who reads history. in the 17th century South, there was no hate for muslims as most came bacause of trade not because of invasion like the north.

1. breach loading cannons cannot be just built, author needs to industrialise with water wheel or coal first. 2. so far only medical sciences is left untouched. it would be cool to see how MC can convince everyone to study human anatomy as superstition was huge back then. Also I do not think ayurveda was something only found in India .there was Chinese medicine as well as Materia Medica in Europe so they already did use plants as medicine. 3. making Bharat mata statue was a bad idea in my opinion as the minorities will not like it. on top of that bharat mata is universal just as motherland. so please do not hindufy it. this will alienate minorities. I know author is a right wing so please do not mind. on another note if author wants to cause muslim riots then Just ignore what i said.

I think the national anthem should be the same, especially the complete version. most don't know about it or it's meaning. it's better to wait for the record player to reveal that as the first song recording.

yes , the key here is magic. Omnitrix has problems scanning the only being that is made of 'mana' where as NRG is free real-estate. I feel that the ben10 writers have made such that science and magic don't mix.

it's funny and idiotic that the MC is in teen titans and is aiming to go to Star Labs yet DOESN'T TRY SCANNING STARFIRE the literal first alien he has met. the author should think his stories through. he is forgetting that the Omnitrix is to scan aliens and not metahumans.I can see how the MC will scan Trigon which should not work as trigon is pure demonic energy. May be able to scan small demons

is it really necessary to write the movie parts in so much detail? just summarise it

I think the main issue with this fan fic is that the author completely forgets that the MC is an reincarnate. He does not wish or want to use any of his knowledge from his world. example 1 - if the MC doesn't remember much about Naruto, it's still does not explain why his main objective has not been engineering as the world already has the tools to make a gun. just ask yourself if you are sent to Naruto world as a child with no skills or system. wouldnt you plan to make a gun or hand cannon as it will easily be able to take on jonins and chunins while being a genin. no the MC just went on to train is tijitsu. even if making one is complicated the MC can make a simple grenade with exploding paper as it would be more effective with shrapnil. and why does he not commission a karrambett knife as it is far superior then a kunai in hand to hand combat. in short , it's as if the MC never existed before coming to this world.

so which road will the mc take ? become a nobal and play the 'game of thrones ' or focus on the people the nobels forget and make a 'peoples republic ' and set up a democracy of sorts. how will the 'game of thrones play out if the MC refuses to play it. imagine if they fight for who is the rightful king and not notice that they don't have any people left.

I don't know why every fanfic just keeps on making MC Overpowered. I mean, the MC here is now strong enough to fight the whole JL already, they're is no more stakes anymore. there is a reason that everyone loves street level heros.

I seriously think the author should change the main viewing from manga to anime. This would mean everone has to sit and watch without acting on anything. atleast from the marinefort arc.