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Little Orph has no chill, out for blood!!

Glad to have new chapters!! I am really curious as to how this owl,goblin, and mikey are gonna fit together.

The potential for this series is phenomenal. It has a deep intricate lore I can tell you already have out tons of work into. The layout here will be better And I only anticipate quality like you have shown us thus far!!

Ive said it once ill say it again. Adende is an absolute BEAST. He practically two tapped the serpent. His speech to Gisla will hopefully get through to her god knows needs it. and to top it off Mikey is alive and getting abducted!!

I was hesitant with no Mikey but this worked out great!!! Getting the rest of the crew some attention was really nice. Gisla is really trying and has good ideas just....lacks the finesse I suppose but our boy adende came in clutch once again!!!

I like seeing Mikey actually have to think. He has onky been in two scenarios where he has gotten to really show his potential like this. The end of the chapter kinda jumped around alot, but that wasn't to much of an issue as it updated us i suppose.

I am loving the progression. I hope mikey and Bat can survive and get a cool fight sequence next chapter!! I hope our little goblin friend doesn't die though he has grown on me alot.

I absolutely love everything about this chapter. The characters introduced here are very interesting and just expand the style and taste of the lore even more. Each new chapter is just making the sum even better

This chapter left on a cliffhanger unfortunately!! But it kept me on edge aswell. The more information I get on Adende the better🤣🤣. for real though it seems we may get to see some lore next chapter and Info dropping from Adende along with teaching Mikey how to control is constantly growing powers, high expectations for tomorrow!!

This chapter helped me remember that Mikey is a child. He is impressionable and still getting a grasp over himself and his powers. Overall though this chapter did a great job at kinda bringing us back from all the pirating adventures he had been doing to the realization of just how crazy life is going for this young adventurer!!

I notice Mikey lacks control of his mana output, as he glowed much longer than gisela and couldn't control Adendes spell. I think he simply needs to be taught how much to release at a given time. He seems to have control over mana flow well but that is about it.