TheElderGod

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A smooth and intelligent start to match that of its primary character. Really well done holding to that same style of writing with a different spin of tone.

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Tharix Origins: The Monk

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TheElderGod

2yr

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^^was definitely thinking the same thing, granted hed not be tooo much help in that fight I don’t think, but it definitely shows a bit about his loyalty…

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Tharix: Tale of an Orphaned Mage

Fantasy · LordEggar

TheElderGod

2yr

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I’d like To Take This Time To Peacefully And Appropriately Say: YOOOOO THIS IS AMAZING EVERYTHING HAPPENING RN IS AMAZING!

ch 0 3 Violet, Lapis & Hazel

Tharix: Tale of an Orphaned Mage

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TheElderGod

2yr

Commented

I’m Pretty sure my other commeant Got flagged but, yeah great chapter👍🏼👍🏼

ch 0 2 The Greymouth Moth

Tharix: Tale of an Orphaned Mage

Fantasy · LordEggar

TheElderGod

2yr

Commented

Seriously Great Chapter, Loved The Minor Cliff Hanger sending There. Now Giving Into This Power What Exactly Does This All Mean For Mikey

ch 0 1 Painful Parallels

Tharix: Tale of an Orphaned Mage

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TheElderGod

2yr

Commented

Adende Is Certified OG. He Is About That Life.

ch 10 Wisteria

Tharix: Tale of an Orphaned Mage

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TheElderGod

2yr

Commented

What A Great Emption Driven Start, Really Cant Expreas To New Readers What A Fun Ride This Kicks Off Into Enough.

ch 0 1 Bittersweet Preparations

Tharix: Tale of an Orphaned Mage

Fantasy · LordEggar

TheElderGod

2yr

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**combat

ch 0 3 The Hunt Begins

Tharix: Tale of an Orphaned Mage

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TheElderGod

2yr

Commented

Finding Myself Adoring The Comeat Of The Series The More I Go Back To Reread Chapters And Events.

ch 0 3 The Hunt Begins

Tharix: Tale of an Orphaned Mage

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TheElderGod

2yr

Commented

I’m Not sure what it is, but I fidk myself reading this chapter over and over again!

ch 0 5 Warm Welcoming

Tharix: Tale of an Orphaned Mage

Fantasy · LordEggar

TheElderGod

2yr

Commented

“Buggro” AKA 🐐

ch 0 6 The Bloody Muddy Brothers

Tharix: Tale of an Orphaned Mage

Fantasy · LordEggar

TheElderGod

2yr

Posted

Really interesting first entry. the fantasy elements are really well done and im very excited to see where the mechanics of magic carry on and see how exactly the world itself continues to be fleshed out in the way that the synopsis seems to promise among the strongest of Tharix. Mikey is a really well done protagonist, I feel as though I can see through his eyes for now as he explores the world of tharix with us rather than explaining the world to us. overall top marks for a really well done prologue.

Tharix: Tale of an Orphaned Mage

Fantasy · LordEggar

TheElderGod

2yr

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Yeah I definitely get what you mean, it’s bizzare in a sense that like, the worlds still feels like its still growing and expanding in an interersting and unique literary way. Super excitited to see where it goes next!

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