Webnovel Author: FREAKKETTONE - Novel Collection

Wow! Just wow! Very well written and interesting story. The world building is fascinating and really well done... You are updating daily and also the story has a really great flow. I like how the realms and various races that inhabit them interact, I still don't know how you will make it work as it seems pretty difficult to me allready, but I have great expectation for this novel. Keep up the good work. [img=update][img=update][img=update]

A very good start! Well, I must say I'm not a fan of female lead but this is some good novel. Unexpected devlopment and interesting character growth... But I have to say you should be careful around the consequences of Julia's action. She killed a person without a care in the world, but she didn't really took care of the aftermath. Rimember that anyway you see it, she is the primary suspect for the murder... Anyway keep it up it is really intriguing. [img=update][img=update][img=update]

Thanks for your support, keep reading as Marduk and my story further devlop.[img=recommend]

Thanks for the heads up! And yeah the Mc may seem too OP but you will see he will struggle a lot in the future.

thanks for the review, it means a lot to me. [img=recommend]

Thanks for the review, I'm still in my first steps as a writer and your advice is really important and helpful to me. I will work harder on the points and problems you stressed, thanks again.

Simply one of the best starting novel I have read. Good writing quality, well done world building and an interesting plot. I'm officially hook up, Keep it up, I'm enthrilled.

A really interesting plot it's a shame for the Writing quality, there are tons of typos and errors, also the punctuation is a mess. The story has lot of potential and a unique plot but you really need to improve the writing quality. Like this it's not entertraining. I would love to read it with an improved English. Work hard Mr. author, you have all the right credentials to write something incredible.

Thanks for the review! [img=recommend]

Nice story until now, the author manmaged to place the groundwork of the story, but I have to tell you that you have to improve your English. There are some typos but that's not the problem, the problem is the very difficult to follow flow of the writing style and the many repetitions that make the read much heavier and boring. The world building and character design are very well made until now, great expectations. I hope you improve your writing that would make the novel that much better and fun to read. Keep it up, I'll keep it in sight.

Wow innovative world building, good English and nice starting plot. The only thing that left me confused is the weakness of the MC's mentality and lifestyle, you said he was ever kind with everyone but then he suddenly change his mind entirely just because he was murder? I felt like it was to sharp of a change and I know he had no choice since it was the only way he could live his second life but meh... I don't know it just feel wrong and a little forced. Anyway is interesting a soli 8,5 out of 10.

I'm not a fan of apocalyctic scenario, but this is damn good. I love the disparity between the number of heroees and of anti-heroes, the world building is interesting I hope it will continue on this path. The plot really is both refreshing and stable. I say this story is promising. The only fault I can find is the in the writing quality since I personally find it a little heavy and a bit difficult to follow. That said I'll keep my eyes on you Mr. Mitsuishi, make this story shine and don't ignore it's potential.

Thanks for the honesty, really. I was already thinking of slowing the pace down, as a matter of fact it is the biggest problem I'm having right now. I'm going to slow down and give more details and everything, I was even thinking of adding another auxilary chapter to explain something I missed about the world building and magic concept. Shall I do it in your opinion?

A promising start, good vocabulary and writing style. The story development is slow but good, nice character design, a dark start with the traumas and all that but very interesting. keep it up, I'm rooting for you.

Honestly, I'm really impressed by the plot. For my personal opinion you only need to work on the writing quality. Good world building, nothing to complain about. I'll be waiting for the devlopment, high expectetions.

Alluring prologue, interesting plot and very good writing quality. The dialogues are very well written, and the descriptions is just the right amount. The flow of the story is nor to fast nor to slow. Great character design. Congrats on the contract, keep up the good work.

A very good start. Interesting, original and refreshing are the most adeguate adjective for this novel. It has great potential. Good english and world building. Never seen before technology and monsters. I have high expectation.

Interesting start. Good and refreshing concept different from most. The world building is really well done and the characters are well defined. It has good potential and a promising future. Updated regularly. I have high expectetions for this work. Don't let me down!!!