terri_burgin

terri_burgin

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terri_burgin
12 months ago
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I really enjoy this story but the miss naming that has started sometimes really take away from the beauty of this story. please be more careful when editing.

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terri_burgin
1 years ago
Commented

the range of emotions you allowed every character in this chapter was brilliant .

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terri_burgin
1 years ago
Commented

Is shen chan a male or a female? The change in pronoun is confusing me.

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terri_burgin
1 years ago
Commented

the story itself isn't bad but the misspellings and typos and pronoun problems are driving me crazy and really taking me out of the story. please edit

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terri_burgin
2 years ago
Commented

I agree I only wish beringer wife could get popularity points I love her character

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terri_burgin
3 years ago
Posted

the story and characters are so good can't wait for the next chapter

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terri_burgin
4 years ago
Commented

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola