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This is without a shadow of a doubt the best Skyrim Fanfic Ever, the comedy is flawless(it doesn't feel forced and always makes me laugh with some of the unexpected dialogue). The Story in the beginning was great,though it was getting a bit boring layer on but then bounced back immediately and the best part is we haven't even scratched the surface on the lore of skyrim hek we didn't even reach the dragons return yet. I hope you continue this Fanfic for a long time wish you all the best and thank you for an amazing experience.

This is my favourite HP fanfic, the translation is amazing Thank you sooo much for posting it My only criticism is that I wish there were more chapters per week other than that its perfect

Please Continue this story, it is sooooo goodd

I want to say that this is one of the best fanfic/novel I've ever read please don't drop it and continue it for a long time 🙏

The concept has potential but is ruined by the personality of the MC. He is too arrogant, has a huge ego, is sometimes smart and most times too stupid and is not self aware. He acts like an asshole and is surprised when he isn't liked. He's supposed to be hiding the fact the he's a transmigrator and a pendragon but is exposing himself at every turn(by exposing too much of his abilities and future knowledge) but he has plot armour that makes those around him become stupid and not notice or simply do notice yet nothing becomes of it. It reminds me of those Chinese novels.To be honest, it was readable in the beginning and I was enjoying myself a bit but after while it became too much whether it was the MCs personality, the plot and the many plot holes.I recommend the author to re do the entire novel and make it better

I have to say that this is not one of the greatest but The Greatest Novel I've ever read and I've read thousands.Personally, I dont really like Harems,Ai that isn't just a robotic personality, Kingdom building,multiversal travel etc,... since most novels that incorporate them suck yet in this novel they all work together soo perfectly.Moreover,there is great character development for all characters and there mix between comedy and seriousness which doesn't feel forced but works together perfectly.Usually, when I read novels there are alot of changes that I would make to make the novel better or more coherent in my opinion but in this there are no major changes that I would make perhaps only minor changes but even if they weren't it'd still be a perfect novel.I especially appreciate all the time and effort it took you to make this Masterpiece and I also appreciate you always asking the readers their opinions on how the story should but also not trying to incorporate all the suggestion but only the suggestions that work in the story.since I've seen it many times when authors try to incorporate too may opinions that end ruining the whole story.I hope you continue this story for a long time since it has soooo much potential and till now in my opinion its perfect.I wish you all the best 🌹

currently on chapter 400 and I think this is a great novel. However, a problem i had with it was that most of the time alot of the characters know something about the secrets of the MC that the MC himself doesn't know about, at first it was okay bit it kept happening again and again that it got annoying. One more problem is that the MC seems super OP yet not OP at the same time and I'm all for it but the way its presented is annoying. He's super talented that he can absorb many crystals easily to improve and he stole alot of crystals from the academy. Moreover he has two grimoires(2 of the strongest elements),3 ancestral staffs and has high proficiency in 3 elements and he no longer has problems with his physical body due to the necklace. why the he'll does he struggle to kill the Holy Lord of wind when he was in the academy he should be able to wipe the floor with him. Moreover after Gabriel defeats izen its supposed to be something great introducing that he was a little brother of a guy on a mountain and that the world they currently live in is a desolate world takes away from the victory and makes you feel that instead of winning he failed by attracting attention of more enemies.and why does everyone know that Gabriel is karyk while he doesn't its super annoying that you just want to scream at Gabriel to figure out the obvious. To summarise 1) The others know more about the MC than the MC himself 2)The MC is not wiping the floor with others simply because of Plot instead of a good reason 3)Whenever the MC wins you figure out that the opponent beaten has a stronger opponents behind him

I haven't started reading this novel yet but the MCs name is jerouch seriously, at least pick a cool name or smthn

I must say this is an amazing novel some things here and there could be better(Example: Lake having to play the playboy character that his sister designed for him and him breaking things off with Evelyn. Even if you don't want her to be the female lead at least make them friends or something with no romance on both sides.). But overall, this is one of my favourite novels. Other than the upper points I mentions the characters,plot,system and world is amazing. I hope if you can take take my suggestion into consideration and PLEASEEE post more chapters.

Please don't screw up this novel It was good up until the part the MC becomes emotional and rose and MC weird and awkward scenesDon't make the MC and emotional idiot I understand he has to deal with his darkness but don't make it too weird and crazy. Make him a tiny bit emotionless and get him to be angry at Rose and her family for restricting his freedom. Get him to tell her to leave him alone or for him to strong arm her father into giving him some space(I mean he's a transmigrator so he knows some info get him to properly use it for his advantage) I know he should use the light and not just be in the shadow but don't make him fully come out into the light keep the majority of his actions un the shadowsand for gods sake make him a bit smarter to be a tiny step ahead of everything and everyone I really hope you take my suggestions into consideration because this novel has potential

Love this novel soo much its in my favourite list of novels and I've read 1000s of them so that's saying something Hope you can release more chapters and continue it till the end.

Amazing novel, I hope you continue this story for a long time and post as much as you can. Thank you Author for this masterpiece ❤

I love this novel, it is a great read. However I would like to offer some feedback. It is a bit too slow almost 80 chapters and we still haven't seen much yet and almost no fights. I like the MC and the story but in my opinion you should speed up the plot a bit you don't have to do anything drastic but simply increase the speed a bit. Hope this helps❤

Is it possible to post more than you currently are posting per week this novel is super good