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Aztecs9
LV 2When you close your eyes you will only see darkness, am I right?
2021-11-22 Joined IndonesiaBadges 5
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Ah, i forget for revision. Should be 'brother-sister relationship' Because before translating I already thought about it, but forgot lol. Thx
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System Zet: Become the emperor of entertainment
Urban · Aztecs9
Well, I'm currently revising maybe a few chapters. I'll let y'all know when the revision is done. I will announce it in the next chapter where the story will continue. I'm just happy when readers really like this novel :)
ch 17 Reason
Jinv The Vtuber System
Urban · Aztecs9
Yeah thx senior:D
Keen's eyes lit up and already found a suitable song, "I'll sing a song called 'Just Memories.'." Keen started strumming the strings of his guitar. Elfy beside him looked at him with eyes of hope.
System Zet: Become the emperor of entertainment
Urban · Aztecs9
thank you very much, after reading this comment, I will try to revise and continue this novel<3
ch 17 Reason
Jinv The Vtuber System
Urban · Aztecs9
I'm sorry maybe I wasn't focused on revising
ch 0 5 Chapter 5 : Booba
System Zet: Become the emperor of entertainment
Urban · Aztecs9
just write "Tinggal kenangan." btw, thanks for the comment, I'm suddenly excited to write it:3
Keen's eyes lit up and already found a suitable song, "I'll sing a song called 'Just Memories.'." Keen started strumming the strings of his guitar. Elfy beside him looked at him with eyes of hope.
System Zet: Become the emperor of entertainment
Urban · Aztecs9
Hallo?
ch 0 4 Chapter 4 : Try singing
System Zet: Become the emperor of entertainment
Urban · Aztecs9
ai em laif, masi idup om
ch 16 Blue Rabbit
Jinv The Vtuber System
Urban · Aztecs9
Chapter 3, the wrong 14 pronouns and I've fixed it. Chapter 4, the wrong 15 pronouns and i've fixed it. I'll continue later
ch 0 2 Moon Goddess and Zombies ( Moona And Ollie!)
Jinv The Vtuber System
Urban · Aztecs9
Done, I forget, Thank you for reminding.
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Jinv The Vtuber System
Urban · Aztecs9
I just revised 1 chapter which where there are 6 pronouns which I haven't changed, and I've changed it. And I also just revised chapter 2 with 18 wrong pronouns. Thank you for reminding me! Please if there is another pronoun error let me know, I really need a comment like this.
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Jinv The Vtuber System
Urban · Aztecs9
and thanks for the power stone, I will add more chapters :)
ch 12 Instant death
Jinv The Vtuber System
Urban · Aztecs9
Njir, padhal dah gw bnerin msih ae she
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Jinv The Vtuber System
Urban · Aztecs9
Tengs my prend
System Zet: Become the emperor of entertainment
Urban · Aztecs9