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Viktor_Valburnt
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‘A few details I find confusing. Lost a leg or legs? What’s there now, wood or is he floating?’ are you even reading, my guy?
ch 0 9 An Unusual Stalker
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it does make a difference, but I won’t tell - that’d be spoiling a major overarching plot.
ch 14 Girl Meets Boy
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don't worry, immersion is my first duty, as always
ch 14 Girl Meets Boy
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have mercy, these are daily updates
ch 14 Girl Meets Boy
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thx
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to you, sir, who understood the reference
Then there were the scholars who thought Mysticism was the one true School of Magic and all others were its subcategories.
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Sevyn merely nodded - he most likely wouldn't kill anyone in his stay, after all. Why would he?
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bonus chapter
will try go for 2k, no promises tho
My boy doesn’t look like he is suffering, if anything, you took it harder than him. beside…. termites? Really? Exposed to -20 degrees? And no, he isn’t ‘suffering’ for the sake of it. Boy appears in the middle of a snowstorm, barefooted, and you expect him to walk out unscathed? I only gave light to what normally would’ve happened. The ritual had no reason to help in that matter as well - Azura wants to see what he can accomplish on his own. Giving him legs would go against all her motive. I don’t want my characters to have plot armor - if something is going to shit, it really is going to shit. Without high stakes, in my opinion, a story can’t have depth. No free cookies. If him losing his legs stumped you that hard, then maybe this isn’t for you.
"Does the cripple fulfill your expectations now?"
Harry Potter - The Northern Son (TES Crossover)
Book&Literature · Viktor_Valburnt
no, the ritual had no reason to do that - it will happen if and when the time is right, so stop asking
"Does the cripple fulfill your expectations now?"
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Next chapter is the conclusion to this Arc - just commenting here as a post note, but I edited all chapters so far that needed some of that polish. No major changes were done - just organized more, and corrected some errors; this just so that I may continue on to the second Arc without any regrets.
ch 0 9 An Unusual Stalker
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Book&Literature · Viktor_Valburnt
your laugh gave it away, if you are asking
ch 0 9 An Unusual Stalker
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The character learns how to work around being maimed - which is what I think makes for a strong character, not to win everything, but to not stay down for long. I appreciate the review anyhow - not everything is for everyone. And you rated quite imparcially, might I add.
still has from the knees up (if it wasn't made clear) I'm not that cruel besides...
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sounded too much like TikTok, there was nothing more that could be done
Tic-Tac, the clock sounded again, and he broke out of his disarrayed thoughts. The bloody interrogation has come to an end, he realized, as well as the man's life - if one were to judge by the scent of gore coming from the room.
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tiptoeing as in the tip of his wooden pointy legs
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having a bit of a writer’s block, may take a while to write again - as this is a hobby though, I won’t stress much about it. Just thought of putting this here as a reminder if you were expecting a regular posting schedule
ch 14 Girl Meets Boy
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