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Vansh_24
LV 1Well........I write novels....... I guess.........
2021-12-01 Joined GlobalBadges 4
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'could see the bones of her shoulder' or 'could see the bones' would be better imo
She held a small pocket knife that was covered in a black liquid and was holding her shoulder with a pained expression on her face and after closer inspection, there was a bloody gash that was so deep that Lucas could see bone.
Infinite Evolution in The Apocalypse
Fantasy · maddaug
well, since I was completely new to this, I didn't know average words per chap XD. But the later chaps are all long
ch 0 4 The Cult of Riona
Conquest Of Darkness
Fantasy · Vansh_24
tbh I don't really get how to do all this, I just write the story I have in my kind using the little English I know
Tsar said before trying to change the topic
Conquest Of Darkness
Fantasy · Vansh_24
My plan is to make nearly every important character smart and perceptive
ch 0 6 Coincidence or Scheme?
Conquest Of Darkness
Fantasy · Vansh_24
Yup, Tsar is the male lead, as for the female lead...... you should or will know soon
ch 0 5 Nexus Proeliator
Conquest Of Darkness
Fantasy · Vansh_24
Of course, but there are going to be some main antagonists who will not just die in 2 chapters, I am gonna build their character and give them a good backstory. And you will get to know in the next chapter of what I am trying to do, so do advice me of you feel something is wrong
ch 12 East Cliff Town
Conquest Of Darkness
Fantasy · Vansh_24
Thanks for pointing it out
ch 0 2 A Simple Life
Conquest Of Darkness
Fantasy · Vansh_24
Nice story, though the mc is irritatingly kind, the characters are interesting and world building is done in a good manner. And seeing he chose a lethal weapon in ch7 I hope he will become ruthless and decisive as that's what detectives are supposed to be. Overall it is a good story with GREAT potential, definitely adding it in my library!!
Librarian of the Eternal Library
Fantasy · MythicBunny