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What beauty does light have if there isn't a glimpse of the dark

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Replied to chiboss050

Sure🤩🤩

Buried beneath the depths of the ocean lies a hidden universe of mysterious life forms that thrive beneath the waves. The once pitch-black waters were illuminated by an array of phosphorescent creatures glowing in a kaleidoscope of colors.

Sin Of Eternity

Sin Of Eternity

Fantasy · Celestial_prince

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lol😅😅😅 am not an AI

He could not remember how I got here but I knew for sure he wanted to leave there as soon as possible.

清清清爽

清清清爽

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please try reading chapter 3_5. it's where I need reviews the most

Thus, an ancient darkness was reborn. one that savaged the whole world, bringing humanity to the very edge of extinction.

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清清清爽

Fantasy · Celestial_prince

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you're writing in past tense right? it's supposed to be had* not is* before the king. he had* two wives not has. has is a present continuous. but it depends on the tense being used

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My Triling System

My Triling System

Fantasy · CSManga

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turned into the city. (full stop) not comma. you introduced a new sentence so it should end with full stop

Days turned to months, and months turned to years and in the sixteenth year, after Kelvin was born, everything seems to be perfect in the Elven land. The used-to-be Elven village has turned into a city, there was more advanced technology than before, and buildings made of glass could be seen at every corner of the city.

My Triling System

My Triling System

Fantasy · CSManga

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It's supposed to be " it didn't take long before these seven elves made their way into the forest, walking deeper in the dark woods. the last sentence seems confusing

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My Triling System

My Triling System

Fantasy · CSManga

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on? On is used to describe when an object is placed on something. so it should be in not on

He was kept in a small dark room when they arrived at their destination, leaving him to ponder what was going to happen to him. He already knew the end. Death.

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清清清爽

Fantasy · Celestial_prince

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See this! I just gifted the story: Inspiration capsule

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See this! I just gifted the story: Inspiration capsule

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