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DarkCyan

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Replied to Neongoldbrick

If you want to drop after the first mini arc (ends at chapter-16), I will have nothing to cry about. But please give it a try till then. Also, thanks for giving this a try <3

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It's a spoiler, but I'll spoil you anyway. The system is a default game system, and the one forcing quests on MC dies off pretty soon.

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Replied to Sympath4u

It's not the "Heaven" from Christian myth. "Heaven" has a different meaning in eastern fantasy, which is similar to "Sky" or "So powerful that they seem unreachable like the skies above".

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Fate/Stay Night - Heaven's Feel Series.

The only selling point of this boring game was the beautiful CG and flashy skills that burnt your retina every once in a while.

THE DEMON KING IS ATTENDING A HERO ACADEMY?!

THE DEMON KING IS ATTENDING A HERO ACADEMY?!

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Nooo!

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What else can I say? Other than "blatant plaizarism" of course! Writing Quality: If you feed the original story "The Demon Prince Goes To The Academy" into chatGPT, that will have much better writing quality than the broken, horrible writing from this work. In short, the author is clearly inept to write in English, or use grammarly. Update Stability: It's not contracted yet, so this part of the review is meaningless for now. Story Development: Exactly the SAME, yet still worse than the original work. When I saw the author saying it changes from chapter 10, I tried reading it. I persevered through the broken writing, read till ch16, and found..... PLOT HOLES OF GALACTIC SCALE. The original work didn't have those plot holes, but because this author tried changing the story after copy pasting the 1st 10 chapters, it became inconsistent. The weirdness of him manipulating demons goes unnoticed, plus he gets to meet AND dine with the Emperor without having a single "dispel" cast on him. Plus, his disguise is based on scroll magic, so it shouldn't last for days. But it somehow does in this story! Damn! Why have a story anymore? The crisis is averted forever, isn't it? World Background: Dunno, but after reading author's improvisation in the first 16chapters, it would be copied with a different name anyway. Character Design: Copied from the original. All characters, except author's improvisation, of course! All in all, an insult to the original novel, by saying that this is an original work and making it so bad. This is a fan-fic of the original "The Demon Prince Goes To The Academy", and a very poorly written one. If someone wants to argue about what's fanfic and what's not, just read "The Novel's Extra" and "The Author's POV". The latter "took inspiration" from the former, but it's not a fanfic, because the entire plot premise (except the concept) is different. The chapters are not copied in a terrible way, and TAPOV is an improvement from TNE. But this work is plainly far worse than the original it took inspiration (plagiarized) from, and adds nothing (yes, nothing. The demon domination ability suddenly requires "control" to dominate demons, and what's this hideous counterpart of Archdemon race?) to the story. It just shows you a broken possibility of what could've happened if the characters were beyond stupid and Valier jr. (Reinhardt) didn't slip away from the princess. So, I would say this is a fan-fic, without any logic, of course!

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