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Eh, yes and no, it’s less about her and more about his pride and the fact that she hadn’t died in one strike, which he favors doing, it’s a pride thing who cares ab that girl lol
He didn't know if he would be able to bring himself to kill her, even though he knew it was necessary.
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Why?
ch 0 5 Chapter 5: The Rebels
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Hey just read it, got some suggestions if you wanna read em. I suggest taking those first two chapters off and adding that authors note to the start or end of your first chapter. Now for the writing, it kind of falls flat, like the whole killing father thing should probably be described. Don’t tell show basically. It’s not bad but just take your time, you could have a chapter of introductory stuff so people can get a feel for your main character and his personality and such, rather than him just saying how he is
ch 20 Chapter 20: King Jiuca of Jiuca
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Yeah I already decided I didn’t want Esdeath as love interest if he has one. It’s just so overplayed and I don’t think Hado’s and her personalities can connect without forcing it
ch 19 Chapter 19: General Meng
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Have plans for her later, trust the vision
ch 0 5 Chapter 5: The Rebels
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It’s true🤷🏽♂️
It is a fanfic of Akame Ga kill👍
"Of course, we got the information straight from the emperor, unless you are questioning him?" Another man, the clear leader, said as he looked around, nearly spotting Hado before the boy jumped onto a tree, instinctively climbing up.
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Ohhh ye I should have been more clear. Akg is short for “Akame Ga Kill” lol
"Of course, we got the information straight from the emperor, unless you are questioning him?" Another man, the clear leader, said as he looked around, nearly spotting Hado before the boy jumped onto a tree, instinctively climbing up.
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It’s in the name of the fic lol
"Of course, we got the information straight from the emperor, unless you are questioning him?" Another man, the clear leader, said as he looked around, nearly spotting Hado before the boy jumped onto a tree, instinctively climbing up.
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Yeah it’s disgusting reading it, now imagine writing it💀
The insects inside of his roamed, finding different areas of his body, as if they were looking at a new house. Though he found this weird, he had to admit to himself that they were calming.
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Yeah it’s just there, It’s why I put warnings in the chapter so people can skip?
ch 14 Chapter 14: Prelude to War (R18)
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There is like a 1% chance for her to stick around long term, chances are she won't be a thing past chapter 30 once he's fully rooted into the world. She's just a tool right now
ch 0 7 Chapter 7: The Smell of Change
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She was strong even without her teigu, You don’t become a general by being weak, she gets even stronger when she receives them, but she’s always been strong
ch 12 Chapter 12: General Esdeath
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Thanks for the comment, next one coming out in about an hour
ch 0 9 Chapter 9: Manipulation of the Mind
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Not exactly, if he were to do something that mimicke that, the people would be dead and instead simply be nests for the insects he puts inside of them, allowing the insects full access to the now dead persons nerves and allat
The insects offer several upgrades to Hado, some are spoilers that I won't reveal, but we have already seen a few. Since Hado's upgrade from the original world he was in, his body has changed tremendously. He has superhuman strength, speed, agility, and battle IQ. It is all programmed into his very soul. Hado can also heal from death as was shown with the soldier stabbing him. This is actually due to the insects, They protect him and he protects them, without the insects he is vulnerable to death, but with them... He's essentially immortal. Of course, there are ways around this, but those don't matter at the moment. Hado can use the insects abilities for different things, like he was able to heal Sayomi because the jeweled wasps have the ability to hack brains, though this is a much grander scale than in real life, it is upgraded for the purpose of the fic and more abilities/explanations will be given later throughout the fic.
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Both are pretty effective
ch 0 9 Chapter 9: Manipulation of the Mind
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It’s a bit of a spoiler, all I can say is kind of
ch 22 Chapter 22: Hado's task
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