Sorry for late reply, I was on a break from this app...lol Anyways, you can use girl/gal/any other casual words older males use to address younger females. Actually, simply girl/little girl will not be bad too.
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Fantasy · Vienna_Gu
Guards are not so sophisticated. They dont use these words, let the true nobles use those words not the guards to show the difference.
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Fantasy · Vienna_Gu
I get the meaning now. It's beautiful, but it is sounds like a slang in English.
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Fantasy · Vienna_Gu
I am trying World Anvil, Campfire Blaze, Bibisco, and a plug in for Microsoft World. I may move 100% to bibisco as its supporter's edition fulfill what I needs the most. But honestly, if you have more money to spend on it there are a lot better alternatives like Scrivener.
ch 0 2 Young Master Bai Changming (1/2)
Fantasy · Leon19
Quite fast to disown her...lol fast boi.
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Fantasy · Vienna_Gu
Plot armor activated successfully.
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Fantasy · Vienna_Gu
Poor bro.
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Fantasy · Vienna_Gu
Woosh. That escalated quite fast.
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Fantasy · Vienna_Gu
Moonbich hotel....
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Fantasy · Vienna_Gu
Phones are working??
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Fantasy · Vienna_Gu
Why are they calling her Miss? Why so much respect?
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Fantasy · Vienna_Gu
I can try to create chapters ranging from 2500-3500. The first volume is a complete prologue volume with big info dumps, sorry that it disturbed you, but since I didn't make a protagonist who starts from beginning, I was kind of forced to create a big prologue and synopsis. It is also difficult for me to edit large chapters. But nevertheless, I am not writing to bore anyone, all the chapters will definitely move the narrative forward in some direction, so, if you see a long one you can expect that story is moving a little bit faster. This is similar to Korean and Japanese novels which produce long chapters, and I am indeed adopting their model here. But even then, let me write a month or two and establish pace for this volume. I will review the chapter updates and word/chapter at that time.
ch 0 5 Immortal Ascension
Fantasy · Leon19
Thanks a lot! I am using a writing software to create a better narrative, expect even better execution of story from now. Thanks for support, without readers like you I would not have gotten this much serious.
ch 0 2 Young Master Bai Changming (1/2)
Fantasy · Leon19
A generic line which still works. Cool!
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Fantasy · Vienna_Gu
No sweat! Don't feel bothered at all. We all are here to help each other after all.
Handsome Prince and Ordinary Woman
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