Webnovel Author: primal_vampire - Novel Collection

after seeing your comment I read all 34 chapters still this story gives ntr vibes and even other authors who write story for first time have better novels your mc gives the feelings of beta cuck male and you say story and character development this is a joke you have worst story and character development and you think all asian husband should be a obident dog for their wife so that she can use that characteristics to just ntr their husband this is 21st century in today's time most of the people only want satisfaction either you are sheltered person or a kid who has never dated or stepped into society

the story is good I like it but the mc gives me the feeling of cuck and sissy eg in the starting when system and Yui were flirting he was not saying any thing to them this novel doesn't give me a feeling of comedy it gives me a feeling of ntr even when his second wife was saying thing like torture him he was doing nothing

the story is good I like it but the mc gives me the feeling of cuck and sissy eg in the starting when system and Yui were flirting he was not saying any thing to them this novel doesn't give me a feeling of comedy it gives me a feeling of ntr even when his second wife was saying thing like torture him he was doing nothing

hey, author I think you should make a chapter containing the level of cultivation realm and can keep updating the realm chapter As the story progresses you can keep increasing the realm like this. I didn't understand the realm because your story doesn't follow the standard cultivation realm.

hey author change the name of your novel from pimp to impotent pervert system this suits the character of mc and surely he will get NTR in future because even his childhood friend is flirting with his driver he is doing nothing to stop it

a good novel like it please keep updating it. please don't drop this novel..................................................................................

even though don't make mc perform femdom stuff that's disgusting.but you give heroine yandere personalities but please no femdom

thank you and i also liked your other novels

hey author I have a request please can you not make Mc pervert it has great storyline please don't destroy it by give Mc disgusting fetishist

HEY IS THERE HAREM IN THE SECOND PART OF NOVEL.....................................................................................................

hey author stop destroying Japanese novels with your Chinese poison I think you should once go to a psychiatrist to get your mental health checked maybe you have been poisoned by the Chinese novel and start hating other countries that you are destroying their novel and your yourself don't have the right to comment on protagonist halo with it your mc will be nothing but just a common VERY IMPORTANT ADVICE: GET YOURSELF CHECKED BY A PSYCHIATRIST YOU HAVE BEEN MENTALLY POISONEND AND BECOME A BRAINDEAD SLAVE OF CHINESE NOVEL