Scatter-brained fanfiction writer who is prone to randomly gaining and losing inspiration
2021-12-22 Joined Global
You deserve jail time for even mentioning either of those
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Video Games · unfortunateGambler
I don't know if you read much farther by the time you see this reply, but SPOILER ALERT: It actually is revealed that he is the Laughing God's favorite transfer and his champion
Did the Laughing God trap the armies pursuing it and destabilize the area, which trapped a few more forces who came later? The last Seraphim seemed certain that the God was still in the area, and said Cain carried its blessing, likely in reference to the system interface.
Fantasy · Aoki_Aku
"Husky computer voice" makes me think:
"(Ding!), System booting. Linking, 'Portal' to the host, please standby." A husky computer-like voice spoke clearly inside his mind.
Fantasy · Azia_Elise
I don't get it either
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Video Games · unfortunateGambler
I thought it was obvious that the first Monster Lord was the Spirit of Darkness
"Yeah," Kevin nodded. "Whatever force created this world, and the Spirits as a result, is the one at fault for everything that happened to you. You were just as much of a victim as everybody else."
Video Games · unfortunateGambler
there will be more chapters. The problem is that I just got s new job last week that's very physically demanding, to the point where I end up passing out shortly after getting home. I will start writing again when my body adjusts
ch 54 Lessons in Chaos Warfare
Video Games · unfortunateGambler
Ah yes, exactly what this story needed. Another who can't read between the lines.
ch 19 Eeveelution System Update 2.0: The Downgrade
Video Games · unfortunateGambler
It's because Alice is incredibly lazy
ch 10 It's Going Down...
Video Games · unfortunateGambler
"Lake's worth of water" mean "enough water to fill up a lake." It's still the water that came from the ocean. Please learn to read before trying to correct me
Just like he and Alice did before heading to the Forest of Spirits, the boy concluded his shopping spree by loading up on tons of food. They hadn't even depleted half of the food in his Backpack of Holding, but it was better to be safe than sorry. Also, as he'd planned in advance, he'd stocked up on gallons of fresh water. After all, the lake's worth of water currently residing in his bag was all seawater, and was more useful as a method of attack rather than saving someone from dying of thirst.
Video Games · unfortunateGambler
Counterpoint: He did keep asking the System over and over again to do something until it gave in and gave him the option to submit a request.
2. One of the reasons why I made the choice to Nerf Kevin in multiple ways was based on how I thought the Being would respond to him asking for a change to his Sylveon form via an update to the System. Some of you many think that it's forced, but in my personal opinion this is the only way such an asshole of a god would react to him trying to weasel his way out of punishment: by ratcheting it up, and including more benefits as well to balance it out. It isn't unprovoked, or even out of place if you think hard about who I've made the Being out to be.
Video Games · unfortunateGambler
nope!
ch 24 Fuck it! Imma drain the ocean!
Video Games · unfortunateGambler
Thank you for these corrections. I wish more people pointed out my typos so I could fix them faster
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Video Games · unfortunateGambler
Do tell.
That affirmation from her two sisters and the man that would likely become her husband when they finally met in person brought a teary smile to the blond woman's face. Dropping the cards remaining in her hands, she reached out and pulled all three of them into a hug, happy to be blessed with such supportive and understanding friends/family.
Video Games · unfortunateGambler
So, overtalkative and trash talking wrestler?
ch 52 Signing Up
Video Games · unfortunateGambler
I pace my chapters to be between 3000 and 5000 words. this is just how it turns out
If only they knew how heated this event would really get…
Video Games · unfortunateGambler
what do you mean by constant interventions? Are you talking about the cliffhangers?
ch 52 Signing Up
Video Games · unfortunateGambler
I accept your apology. Heathen.
[New Evolutions Added: Obsideon and Terrareon.]
Video Games · unfortunateGambler
I accept your opinion, no matter how wrong and backwards it is
[New Evolutions Added: Obsideon and Terrareon.]
Video Games · unfortunateGambler
No. I envision it being as awkward to look at as possible, with no hope of looking normal ever again
As she expected, her mount quickly gave up. "Hey, if you want to stay up there, it's fine with me. You know how much I love the feeling of your thighs on my neck and shoulders. I just wanted to give you a way out of the public eye."
Video Games · unfortunateGambler
Bite is Dark Type
Monster Girl Quest: Eeveelution
Video Games · unfortunateGambler