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Rzora

Rzora

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I'm a person that exist on a planet call Earth, my home is global and live in a house,... I'm not suspicious!

2021-12-26 Joined Global

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Hey guys, Rzora speaking! Usually authors would give their own work a 5/5. But personally I don't think my work is good enough for that. I may change it, if I deemed it worthy enough of a 5/5. But honestly speaking there only barely any chapter for you to based your opinion on. Anyway I want to flesh out more of the power system and wolrd building without spoiling to much. So first, "What the story about?": A rats of society, someone one who no longer have a place come back, Aeter (short for Aeternum, which is Latin for eternity, lazy I know), and his mysterious sister Kaula. Followed his path to discovered the hell inside everyone of us with his own hell that nobody can never hope to understand. Yes this story contained some or a lot of philosophy. I will have to read a lot of philosophical book for this. "What is Mark?": Mark is a manifestation of one's being, Mark will grow along side of the user until one day it will be awaken through strong emotions such as fear, happiness, sadness,... usually the cause of an "Awaken" is trauma, *wink* *wink* "How is the world building?": Currently when I'm writing this there not much chapter so I didn't delve much into world building yet. But as a fan and a readers who was fascinated by LOTM insane world building a lore. I also want my to world to be as real as LOTM. "Writing quality": Yeah it kinda bad right imo, but it certainly will improved, just need some experience... I hope. "Will there be love interest?": Yes! Three to be exact, no it's not incest, and yet Aeter an Kaula are 100% blood related and I'll never change that. But I do plan 3 different love interests with different personalities and story and not based their entire personality on the fact that they loved the MC. "Will it be a harem then?": Heheheh, Not sure, *wink* *wink* Honestly there not much going on right now but my plan is that to make a novel where I can enjoyed by incorporate all the part I like about novels. So if any of my plan does not to your liking, then it's fine everyone have their own reference. Though I'm sure some of the plot I have in mind will change over time but all that I said in here would still be valid in the official work... unless I want to be trendy and give Aeter a system with a 20 girls harem or something. Anyways, Rzora, Peace!

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At least she and Faith have something common they both love shinies (normal shinies and Diablo's shinning abs)

I watched as Iena's eyes went wide, and she nodded her head. And suddenly wrapped her arms around me. "Master is smart!" 

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now kiss

"Why!? Why are you forcing me to become a servant of a lower being!?" Iena had tears in her eyes as if she had been completely betrayed. But Diablo's expression did not change in the slightest as the contract formed between the two of us. By her reaction, I do believe Iena is in love with Diablo.

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Where shinies?

"That doesn't mean she can just go and name any man my fiance! I don't even have a boyfriend! Diablo is a summon!" I yelled out, only to have my brother give me a sympathetic gaze. Why do I feel like the corner of his lips are twitching as if he is trying to hide his smile? This bastard is making fun of me in his head!

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Very poor choice of words

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But what I heard next was the last straw. "You were born!"

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Just barge in someone's office and fucking sole their first kiss. What a chad.

The door suddenly slammed open, causing Annie and me to jump. Adel came marching into the room and around my desk. She then reached out and grabbed my face, and before I knew it, Adel's lips were on mine. It was only for a second, a very split second, before she pulled back and stood in front of me with wide eyes….  "I guess it is love…." Was what slipped from her mouth as she stared at me with rosy cheeks.

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No, no no no no no. Don't you dare raise the freaking flag Adel.

"I don't know! I just get aggravated when any man or girl is near you! I feel like I might lose you." Adel replied, her voice going softer. But she raised her head and continued:  "I had a dream where you went far away!" 

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Ah, classic Adel

"Mmm…. But I do wonder one thing…" Annie said as she held onto my arm tighter and stared off towards the door. "If I were to give you a peck on the cheek right now, would the one standing on the other side of the door lose it completely?"

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Relatable... Been there feel it. Not the Princess part.

I stared at the passing blue sky as the carriage I was in slowly made its way back to my estate. My drawn out sighs could not be blocked as I watched the clouds floating aimlessly by. "I wish I was a cloud…." I muttered to myself, causing a certain Princess at my side to chuckle. 

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Ah yes. A very subtle threat

I took a deep breath before letting out a long, drawn out sigh. "Fine. But I will be damned if they just give up the throne because they don't want it." I narrowed my eyes as I  looked at Adel and Lance as I said: "Lance, Adel, if either of you says I quit, I will kill you!" 

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Stop raising the flag old man. If you want death flags just plant one for you don't have to drag Adel into this. Oh and Lance too, I guess.

"Faith, you are speaking your mind very loudly!" The king reprimanded. But all he got from me was a humph as I turned and ignored him. But he still continued: "Even if they did not give up their rights, I still would have made you third in line. Faith, you are a treasure any kingdom would want to keep tied to them. But for me, I just want you to have the right to take control if something were to happen to Lance or Adel. I am entrusting my kingdom to you in case something we did not plan for happens." 

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Should have bargained more. Two shiny rocks!

I hung my head. Why didn't I just go to another kingdom? Why did I stay in this kingdom only to be given things I don't want? I looked back up to the king, who was standing here teetering back and forth on his heels with a very complicated expression. "Can I give this reward back for a shiny rock?" 

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Nah... You should make a marriage certificate first. Sign by Adel, of course.

I watched as the king stepped forward and placed his big hand on my head. "As of this moment, Faith Cyrilia will be known as Princess Cryilia, third in line to the throne!"

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This fell more like a wedding as time passed for some odd reason...

With Adel hanging from my arm I walked forward one step at a time towards the throne room of the castle.

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Yes... Surrender to your inner demon, little Faith. Let the carnage begin!

"These people wish to kill you, but you want to show them mercy? They wish to harm those I care about, but you want to let them live? Your Majesty, there are times when people should be kind, and there are times when people should become a demon. I will be the demon this time. I will make sure this kingdom no longer has to worry about an uprising again! For the love of my kingdom, I will turn into a demon." I truly loved this kingdom. But it was filled with filth. We now had the chance to fully clean this filth out. I may be in a crazed state, but I still had some of my rationale. 

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When the quiet kid is tired of playing games:

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A heavy pressure suddenly fell over the court. At the same time, Bell used my call as her cue to come out of her space and sit on top of my head with her chin raised high. "In this world, the stronger you are, the more say you have in the world. In This courtroom right now, I am the strongest here. So let me ask you something. How corrupt are you?" 

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That burn will need god level light magic to heal.

"To be honest, I would have rather died starving and thirsty than die as many of the others had. You sit in your fancy houses and feed off the common people taking in their tax money to make that stomach of yours as fat as it is today. And to top it off, you act all high and mighty, thinking you are better than everyone else. But if it wasn't for your status, could you have that fancy dress? Could you have that shiny jewelry? Could you have that greasy, oily skin that oozes with the fat that is trying to escape your body!?

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