Webnovel Author: DarthPrince - Fanfic Collection

I just changed the sentences where Alex agreed with the father that he was in the wrong. Instead, I emphasized that no matter what he would not turn his back on his pokemon. So instead Alex is conflicted but still believes that he did the right thing. Quite a few have commented on the previous chapter so I was not sure if I should delete it. What will happen to their comments? Will they also get deleted?

Huh, didn't know that. Can you briefly expand on the test?

This is kind of a spoiler for later but still... The master ball is currently in very early stages of development and will be involved in the evil teams storyline. There is no guarantee that this will even pan out and be able to store legendaries. Even if they are able to make the master ball later on in this fic, no poke ball will ever be strong enough to hold a legendary against its will. They can just simply break out and destroy the master ball if they wish. Does that mean it is still a master ball?

Like I mentioned in the Chapter, this is not how bonds form. Bonds will typically require both the trainer and pokemon to have an emotional connection and mutual loyalty. They will need to want to bond with each other and the bond forms because of mutual consent. However, Legendaries do not conform to the normal rules, do they? It is entirely possible that Suicune may force a bond with a human he likes and finds worthy. Maybe there is something special about Alex that even he doesn't know anything about

The image of Alex Waterflower:

That's actually a great point. Thanks for mentioning this.

I did have plans to include a pseudo legendary into his team. As you may have noticed in Chapter 1, the aura attunement factor will play an important role in this fic, potentially limiting the scope of Pokemon for a trainer, barring certain exceptions. Though, is goomy available in Sinnoh? That could potentially alter what I had in mind.

The next chapter will be the Indigo Conference Finals. I am looking forward to writing a Pokemon match...😀

Would it not make more sense for some changes to come into effect? It could have been the hermione was too distracted and could not stop the curse in time? Neville longbottom is also not Harry Potter and just more confidence should not give him great flying skills....it just does not make sense and this whole story feels lazy like you don't want to change anything for fear of actually thinking.

The reason the author is making everything so complicated is because he does not know how to continue the story. He literally explained that if we don't follow his dumb train of thought, the story will be boring. I have lost any hope I had for this Fanfiction.

if you ask me, this chapter destroyed this wonderful story for me. He has the confidence of a regional professor and is a champion level trainer and is going to join an evil organisation to destroy it when he could just use the video evidence and public opinion along with Alola as a back up to destroy Lysande. What he is doing is monumentally stupid. Pls rewrite this chapter and don't destroy this amazing fanfic.

This is one of my favourite Pokemon fanfics. I am really curious though, will Mason approach the police or league authorities and charge that person with theft, colluding with terrorists and attempted murder or will he act like a dumb person and just let it go and wait till he comes across him again? After all, with the backing of Professor Oak along with the testimony of two former gym leaders, even the richest person should not be to go Scott free especially if one was a foreign national associating with terrorist activities in another region.