So much info-dumping, too much info-dumping, information that could have been told throughout more chapters through more natural means was just dumped. And you know what? I skipped all of it, even worse. I promise you, all the information I just skipped, yeah, it's gonna have f*vk all to do with the rest of the plot, so I didn't even miss a thing.
ch 0 1 Prologue: Emergence
Fantasy · False_Architect
I think you need to cut it down, as it is, it is just a wall of text.
"He's... He's alive? I thought he was dead? Perhaps it was an error... But, this is the first survivor of the Godheart Program! Send the recording of the surgery to the Master, handle the subject with the utmost care. And monitor his vitals, while he's alive for now, if his body begins to crumble from the burden of being the host to a God's Heart, then we must act immediately. His body's value is immense, as the only person to have survived the project his body will be a valuable source of data even if he doesn't survive."
Fantasy · Ramen_Guy10
Way...way too much info dumping, cut it down to the essentials, we can guess he has a god's heart from the words 'god heart' programme you really didn't need to state it twice.
"He's... He's alive? I thought he was dead? Perhaps it was an error... But, this is the first survivor of the Godheart Program! Send the recording of the surgery to the Master, handle the subject with the utmost care. And monitor his vitals, while he's alive for now, if his body begins to crumble from the burden of being the host to a God's Heart, then we must act immediately. His body's value is immense, as the only person to have survived the project his body will be a valuable source of data even if he doesn't survive."
Fantasy · Ramen_Guy10
Van der wall forces, you mean those weak forces of attraction that can't prevent vapor pressure from forming over solutions? Get real, you know that's BS.
As she stuck to the wall, Peter started to explain, "Our Wall-Crawling ability is achieved by the use of Van der Waals Forces. By using electrostatic clinging on a molecular level, our bodies are able to control our internal magnetic fields in a way that allows us stick to objects or vice versa."
Anime & Comics · Daoist_Over_God
She doesn't know exactly what those protocols are. She can guess what they are but she can't pinpoint them. That is what she meant.
He didn't elaborate, the bastard, just throwing out words I had no idea about, well I could guess but that was beside the fact.
Anime & Comics · SthUnlimted
It's men's...ah, I must have fucked it up.
And now this is gonna be a running joke, good on you for that.
Fine you mother ducker. Give me 24 hours.
This book has been deleted.
Hiatus
ch 45 Hellfire invasion(10): Rescue(2)
Anime & Comics · SthUnlimted
Hiatus. Working on a different project.
ch 45 Hellfire invasion(10): Rescue(2)
Anime & Comics · SthUnlimted
Hiatus
And get thrown into the American childcare system?
ch 0 2 Injection 1.2
TV · SthUnlimted
Inverse? Interesting but no, you might have noticed that the 'skill' part of the system is absent.
ch 0 2 Injection 1.2
TV · SthUnlimted
Not a priority but maybe.
ch 0 2 Injection 1.2
TV · SthUnlimted
Well, thanks for the feedback and yeah same.
Fucking never.
TV · SthUnlimted
Maybe it will be useful, but really it depends.
(Reward: A trait of your choosing.)
TV · SthUnlimted
An entire chapter of info dumping, are you kidding me, dude? Bloody really?
ch 24 DEMETER SNOW(3)
Inside my favorite novel
Fantasy · CAESAR20