That sucks. I hoped we were finally past all of the back stories back story to get to the present, and now it's being rewritten. guess I'll check this again in a few months to see how it's changed.
ch 0 1 The Beginning After The End
Anime & Comics · ZaelKliz
+1
1. Sword Art Online(30 chapters)
Anime & Comics · heavenlydawn_
Having a proper ground work is important to keep the story flowing and interesting. Only having action will only get you so far until people get bored of it.
A/N: you know I kind of wanted to skim past this and get to the more action parts of the story I felt it was necessary to add the scenes with Renner and her father, give a glimpse of how they usually interact and how their relationship is like. So please tell me your thoughts on that, how do you feel about it?
Anime & Comics · Xinum_Sensational
I believe he was pre-writing far ahead of his public release, probably to start a patreon.
ch 0 8 Notice
Anime & Comics · Kururin4221
+15 stat points per two levels. The item levels at 50%.
I blinked, not having expected getting a second set of stats per level. This essentially doubled my already doubled stats, which would be doubled again by my soul rank. I would get stronger six times faster than a normal person. More than that, thanks to the now ten stat points I would get per level.
Others · Mhiktur
"In retaliation, Iris retaliated" stood out to me. AI is coming along great, but it's still not perfect.
I'm quite a fan of Reborn as a Space Merc, so would love to see what you do with it. I never got into One Piece, so my interest in reading would be entirely up to how the story is told with no preconceived notions.
Let me know what your honest opinions are.
Anime & Comics · ManOfCultureLeon
I hope you come back to this story eventually, I enjoyed it quite a bit. Your other story doesn't interest me due to the setting. *shrug*
ch 22 Chapter 21 - Another World of Heroes
Anime & Comics · Try_hard
Issei is way too much of a push over. Not even asking for a reward. Not calling him out on 'controlling Koko' after he's captured when they couldn't control him before. I'm not sure what your plan is long term on his character, but as of right now he feels like a paper tiger. He *is* strong, but he's too easily pushed around. I like him more than the original Issei, but somehow I also dislike him more because he could be so much more.
ch 96 Chapter 96: So he really beat high class devil!
Anime & Comics · Orael
That's a total gain of 71EXP, and Nero only gained 56. Which one was incorrect?
This book has been deleted.
I like the story so far, looking forward to more chapters.
ch 0 1 Chapter 2
Others · Nikhil_Tom_Biju
Just wondering, is this festival going to take place over, like, 30 chapters or something?
ch 69 Chapter Sixty-Seven
Anime & Comics · Iseeyou6969
*Her. Do you keep confusing your Vali's gender?
Vali, always quick to chime in, couldn't resist adding a playful remark. "That's a shame. I would have liked to meet your parents," he teased, a mischievous grin playing on his lips.
Anime & Comics · Orael
I still don't get the way you are handling his stats. A few chapters ago during an update, some of his stats were crazy high, like 8k range. Even considering the condensing a level up should provide, that should still put him, stat wise, *way* above a level 1. He is OP, but how OP is he?
ch 12 Chapter 12
Anime & Comics · Wabathon
Why not just focus on your currently popular fic? I see authors do this and then complain that they don't get as many stones or views because they split their workload and focus.
ch 48 New Fic Poll
Highschool DxD: I have a Dimensional Travel System
Anime & Comics · heavenlydawn_