THE story flow is okay suggest a more inclusive plot and more action to be in the story otherwise its good The author skillfully crafts a narrative that captivates from the very beginning, drawing readers into the intricate world of a crime family navigating the complexities of power, loyalty, and celestial forces. The characters are richly developed, each carrying their own weight in the narrative. The fusion of a celestial element adds a layer of mysticism and depth, elevating the story beyond conventional crime dramas. With its vivid imagery, intricate plot twists, and a perfect blend of cultural nuances, The Novel promises an immersive and unforgettable reading experience
Urban · bird_loverr
It is a good book but you should look more on adding more people to the story but its perfect overall you have a great idea and a wild phantasy
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THE story flow is okay suggest a more inclusive plot and more action to be in the story otherwise its good The author skillfully crafts a narrative that captivates from the very beginning, drawing readers into the intricate world of a crime family navigating the complexities of power, loyalty, and celestial forces. The characters are richly developed, each carrying their own weight in the narrative. The fusion of a celestial element adds a layer of mysticism and depth, elevating the story beyond conventional crime dramas. With its vivid imagery, intricate plot twists, and a perfect blend of cultural nuances, The Novel promises an immersive and unforgettable reading experience
Silk and Shadows
Urban · bird_loverr