The story starts with a rather intriguing opening before a large timeskip, at which point the pacing slows down as the author makes the effort to establish world information. The writing is done well, with care taken to include necessary details about things that could be important in the future.
It's a decent story, one that seems like it'll be safe if it sticks to the strength of the genre. The pacing is a little on the slower side, but that's not something necessarily bad. Overall, a strong start.
The story starts and we're introduced to what I assume to be the MC. He makes an immediate strong impact on the reader, before the story begins to develop. The setting is established well enough for the short current length, and it makes the reader feel like they know enough about the world at that point. As someone who doesn't really care about vulgarity, the only complaint that I have is that there seems to be too much needless swearing. But what I personally dislike won't be what others do, and it definitely fits the world.
I have no problem killing the current MC and bumping someone else to that role. ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)
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Considering the site is filled with similar novels, this one is like a breath of fresh air. A story of intrigue, with few details given to us that make us ask questions about the world. A very strong opening to the novel.
The first chapter does a good job of setting up the story for the reader, introducing the mc and their transmigration. Seems like it will be a typical cultivation style story, so if you're someone who likes the genre then check this out.
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An interesting story. The fusion of magic and tech, along with sci-fi elements is something that isn't all that explored, so this story is rather unique in that regard. The reader is immediately presented with a mystery that draws them in, and that serves as the basis for the story Good luck author.
An interesting beginning, with a lot of things to hook the reader in and make them curious about the characters and the world. System seems different, and the interactions between it and the mc are witty.
If you mean the Leadership skill that he unlocked in the skill tree, there's not really a way to use it. The first skill in each tree is little more than an additional stat point, with the added bonus over just buying the stat of providing progress to unlock deeper skills in the skill tree (that will have things that are more like traditional skills.)
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Waking up one autumn morning with no recollection of the previous night. Evan finds himself thrust into a world of the supernatural, one filled with danger. In a race against time, he must find a way to master his power before he falls victim to the enemies of humanity.13 Chs 0 Collections
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System of Legends: I Will Lead Them All!
4.92
WSA Entry!! Gus Braye is a failure among successful experiments. Thrust into a galactic war against a brutal enemy, he suddenly awakens his dormant power. Can he master it before he is consumed by the war? Bonus Chapters: (Weekly) 35 PS 50 PS298 Chs 1.7k Collections
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The One Snap Boy
4.64
Marcus Grant was a special child. Anything he wanted, he could have with a snap of his fingers. But life like that gets boring. He snapped away comfort, and his power, and thrust himself into a new world. One with new people to meet, new things to do, and new challenges to conquer. If you enjoy, be sure to drop some stones! You can contact me here: Discord: Stormzz#4473 My other work (WSA): https://www.webnovel.com/book/system-of-legends-i-will-lead-them-all!_23117959906254205151 Chs 376 Collections
The story is progressing along at a solid, consistent speed. Descriptions of things are overall good, such as character designs. The tense sometimes jumps back and forth between past and present a little, although for the most part it is in the present (something I'm personally not a fan of). Overall, the characters are fairly well fleshed out for the chapters released, and there ae plenty of questions being posed.
Marigold, A New World
Fantasy · Maxemillian