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Still remember the name of the story?

I'm not surprised that a lot of people automatically hates on a story if the MC is not overpowered in the beginning. Peak Brainrot.

I'm geniunely confused on what you're trying to convey here because I have never wrote a "fanboying MC" or something lol

Not great but not bad either. The dialogues are a bit stiff, it doesn't feel natural but it's readable. I stopped reading when characters from Game of Thrones were summoned, they feel really out of place in the story (which makes sense since they aren't from the world) so I can't really find myself immersed.Although I'm kind of surprised that no Yamanaka and healer was hired to know what happens on both mind and the body when consuming a Joint sold by a 12 years old, it made the Hokage and the ninjas overall look very inconmpetent since that could be exploited by other villages.

Wow this is horrible. The MC was beyond obnoxious, everything that happens is stiff and feels forced. The 1st flying lesson was horrible, I wonder why this has a lot of 4-5 stars reviews because seriously, who wants to read a story where every interaction and events are forced💀

Well said.

The stereotype💀 "an american teenage Snoop Dogg", might as well call every asian "Jackie Chan" lmao

Didn't expect much so I wasn't really disappointed. This story is above average from the standard in this platfrom but it's still lacking to be called a good story.I haven't really made it that far, the stiff interactions really made me lose interest. The characters just don't feel alive nor interesting. The story just reads like a chinese novel, even the synopsis is like one.To be fair, there were thoughts that was put into making this story but the writing is just lacking.

I might not agree on his first point but his point about giving him an overpowered system despite not wanting the mc overpowered makes no sense, no?