Webnovel Author: Renee_Writes

Renee_Writes

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See this! I just gifted the story: Inspiration capsule

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The Billionaire's Proposal {A Fake Engagement}

Urban · Renee_Writes

Renee_Writes

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I, personally would give my book a 4.8 star rating because I've to support myself as well. I know how much I've dedicated to shaping the characters, ensuring my book is void of grammatical errors and I know for sure that this book would be a blast. spoiler alert; there's a secret, one neither of you see coming. What you expect to happen, might not be what would happen. A very dark secret accompanied with a favor. what would someone who has it all, really want from someone who also has it all?

The Billionaire's Proposal {A Fake Engagement}

Urban · Renee_Writes

Renee_Writes

1mth

Replied to 1000000_Lives

good question. why didn't she just sell the ring for the money? Jazmyn got something up her sleeves she doesn't wanna tell us

The Billionaire's Proposal {A Fake Engagement}

Urban · Renee_Writes

Renee_Writes

1mth

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I'm not really a fan of these kind of books but I must mention the things I love about this book. The writing quality is so darn good. The book is interesting, it has the hook to keep you in. If I were to rate this book in one word, I'd say, ‘awesome’. Keep up the good work, author😌😊

Records Of A Seeker: I'm An Ant

Fantasy · 1000000_Lives

Renee_Writes

1mth

Replied to Renee_Writes

okay**

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The Billionaire's Proposal {A Fake Engagement}

Urban · Renee_Writes

Renee_Writes

1mth

Replied to MAXandMILLS

lol okuay

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The Billionaire's Proposal {A Fake Engagement}

Urban · Renee_Writes

Renee_Writes

1yr

Replied to Sophia_Yomere

so it's really interesting? thanks though. Thought of deleting the book to quit writing, I needed this motivation. I really do appreciate but I can't continue the book yet. I'm still in a writing dilemma

A CEO'S Love Story

Urban · Renee_Writes

Renee_Writes

1yr

Replied to Renee_Writes

repitition*

Yet no one was to ever find out about what Sandra had done because it was despicable and unworthy to be heard. At work everyone had been trying to work so hard on their biggest production so far but no one would have believed that the reason why they suddenly let Sandra take the female lead role was due to the fact that she gave her body for it.

PATHETIC REVENGE

Realistic · violet_24

Renee_Writes

1yr

Commented

At this juncture, explanation is a lot. You can summarize all your explanations in a sentence, get to the bottom line of your story or readers would drop your book. Get to the dialogue, get to what's currently happening. Your book is written in past tense and 3rd person pov, i.e the (he, she, them, we, they, their), now continue in past tense, maintain your tense and the POV. if you're mixing povs, make sure you don't make it too much and mix only one POV with this one, like first POV would do. i.e (I, myself) but I suggest you remain in 3rd POV, mixing povs isn't easy but get to the bottom line of your story. if you keep giving a lot of explanations with zero dialogue and it's not getting to the point of the book, readers would eventually drop your book

But time passed by and Sandra kept going for surgeries with the claim that she was okay and nothing was wrong but sources claimed that she had over stepped her boundaries in undergoing surgeries and even went as far as bribing the doctors to keep it a secret.

PATHETIC REVENGE

Realistic · violet_24

Renee_Writes

1yr

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long been in the business. (then you can bring in the part of her losing to Winter, but make it brief so you can get to the bottom line of your book, or readers won't pick it up)

Sandra was Kyle's lover and girlfriend but ever since Kyle joined her in the industry due to his unique physique people regarded more respect to him than they gave to her despite the fact that she had long been in this business even before Kyle and Winter but now she was gradually loosing her fame to Winter because she was loosing her beauty and youth faster than everyone had predicted while Winter was just as outstanding as an angel with sleek smooth and fair skin that fits a queen, long straight legs and excellent curves.

PATHETIC REVENGE

Realistic · violet_24

Renee_Writes

1yr

Commented

that she had long been in the business. The others that come after it isn't relevant.

Sandra was Kyle's lover and girlfriend but ever since Kyle joined her in the industry due to his unique physique people regarded more respect to him than they gave to her despite the fact that she had long been in this business even before Kyle and Winter but now she was gradually loosing her fame to Winter because she was loosing her beauty and youth faster than everyone had predicted while Winter was just as outstanding as an angel with sleek smooth and fair skin that fits a queen, long straight legs and excellent curves.

PATHETIC REVENGE

Realistic · violet_24

Renee_Writes

1yr

Commented

due to his unique physique,* observe punctuations. I don't read fantasy novels, but I have to, for you😊😊

Sandra was Kyle's lover and girlfriend but ever since Kyle joined her in the industry due to his unique physique people regarded more respect to him than they gave to her despite the fact that she had long been in this business even before Kyle and Winter but now she was gradually loosing her fame to Winter because she was loosing her beauty and youth faster than everyone had predicted while Winter was just as outstanding as an angel with sleek smooth and fair skin that fits a queen, long straight legs and excellent curves.

PATHETIC REVENGE

Realistic · violet_24

Renee_Writes

1yr

Commented

so far.* But*

Yet no one was to ever find out about what Sandra had done because it was despicable and unworthy to be heard. At work everyone had been trying to work so hard on their biggest production so far but no one would have believed that the reason why they suddenly let Sandra take the female lead role was due to the fact that she gave her body for it.

PATHETIC REVENGE

Realistic · violet_24

Renee_Writes

1yr

Commented

At work,* and there's reputation. "At work, everyone has been trying to work so hard"❌ (like tautology) Try: Everyone has been trying to work so hard

Yet no one was to ever find out about what Sandra had done because it was despicable and unworthy to be heard. At work everyone had been trying to work so hard on their biggest production so far but no one would have believed that the reason why they suddenly let Sandra take the female lead role was due to the fact that she gave her body for it.

PATHETIC REVENGE

Realistic · violet_24

Renee_Writes

1yr

Commented

had done,*

Yet no one was to ever find out about what Sandra had done because it was despicable and unworthy to be heard. At work everyone had been trying to work so hard on their biggest production so far but no one would have believed that the reason why they suddenly let Sandra take the female lead role was due to the fact that she gave her body for it.

PATHETIC REVENGE

Realistic · violet_24

Renee_Writes

1yr

Commented

twas❌❌❌ It was

Kyle looked at the time and twas already late so he left for home. Thinking about everything that had happened these past few weeks was quite a story to tell on his own part.

PATHETIC REVENGE

Realistic · violet_24

Renee_Writes

1yr

Commented

It* rang again. After all,* he better listen to her,*

it rang again and again in his head, after all he had better listen to her or there would be huge consequences apart from loosing his reputation in the filming industry.

PATHETIC REVENGE

Realistic · violet_24

Renee_Writes

1yr

Posted

To be frankly honest with you, I'm not a fantasy reader, you made just a very little grammar mistake. Your story is quite interesting to tell and would have a lot of readers and fans and would even get a contract if you can fix these issues; 1) No cliffhangers. Nothing intrigues me to read on...I read the first chap and can't get past it 2) Excessive irrelevant sentences...mind you, this book is nice, but you put a lot of time explaining what you could explain in a single paragraph and get to the bottom line of the story. 3) In as much as your grammar is good, I've to tell you this. Your book is written in past tense, at least, from the first chapter I see and it should remain in past tense through out.. Nice work you have there author, little to zero mistakes! I understand, I'm not better myself, yeah? But, I'm trying to improve. If you check my novel https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/24855973605013505?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4319793355, you'd see I have some reviews that hurt, I had to delete my chaps and re write my book and take corrections, if I didn't do that, I wouldn't only not get a contract, but I will also not have readers. fighting author! Keep up the good work. We can do it! Achieve!!!

Keepers of Every Universe

Fantasy · Kana_Haisha

Renee_Writes

1yr

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whereby it came* to a stop, not come that sentence was written in past tense and should continue thus

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Keepers of Every Universe

Fantasy · Kana_Haisha

Renee_Writes

1yr

Posted

the book looks interesting. I haven't had time to read it but I must commend you for giving it a unique start. I'll surely add it to my library for later.

Wandering through the star

Fantasy · MatildasBT

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The Billionaire's Proposal {A Fake Engagement}

The Billionaire's Proposal {A Fake Engagement}

The Billionaire's Proposal {A Fake Engagement}

Records Of A Seeker: I'm An Ant

The Billionaire's Proposal {A Fake Engagement}

The Billionaire's Proposal {A Fake Engagement}

A CEO'S Love Story

PATHETIC REVENGE

PATHETIC REVENGE

PATHETIC REVENGE

PATHETIC REVENGE

PATHETIC REVENGE

PATHETIC REVENGE

PATHETIC REVENGE

PATHETIC REVENGE

PATHETIC REVENGE

PATHETIC REVENGE

Keepers of Every Universe

Keepers of Every Universe

Wandering through the star