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What do you mean, so he was literally beat to death accoring to you. And i find it hard to believe that it was done in plain sight. Plus whos attention would be piqued by a weak poor boy running away from a gang, is it a natural response and i suspect everyonenis already used to it anyways.
What these kids didn't know was that the kid in front of them was Uchiha Itachi, the most talented member the legendary Uchiha clan has ever produced, his fighting capabilities were second to none, how could these trifling kids remotely hurt him? Even though Itachi no longer had his old body he still retained all of his memories, that includes his taijutsu… Itachi even had his Sharingan, albeit 1 tomoe but it was still enough to predict their moves.
Anime & Comics · Shen_
🥶 I cried.
Lol
What i meant is he didnt want to attract attention and could hterefore just run or lure hem to a secluded location, but yeah, i dont really have a problem with what you wrote, just slid in a little comment.
What these kids didn't know was that the kid in front of them was Uchiha Itachi, the most talented member the legendary Uchiha clan has ever produced, his fighting capabilities were second to none, how could these trifling kids remotely hurt him? Even though Itachi no longer had his old body he still retained all of his memories, that includes his taijutsu… Itachi even had his Sharingan, albeit 1 tomoe but it was still enough to predict their moves.
Anime & Comics · Shen_
Lol, writing a big paragraph to my every comment. Dont mind my little critique, I just tend to write what i think sometimes, not saying your novel is bad; so far, except for the grammar, its going pretty well, i like how the character, unlike most of what we see today, is on the colder side.
"Hmph" Ma Bo was getting tired of the talk, hence he rushed at ling Feng and threw the first punch. But to his shock, not only did ling Feng not move but he watched as the fist came swinging at his face, when there was a millimeter of distance Itachi swiftly dodged to the left, and did a spinning back kick right on Ma Bo's face.
Anime & Comics · Shen_
Bruv, why are there always hidden experts roaming some desolate woods ffs. Like in every cultivation novel you see one.
The figure had seen everything that transpired here, including the fight.
Anime & Comics · Shen_
And here I was, wondering what a divite tagger was… turns out it was a dagger…
Itachi then looked at the other prize, the Divine dagger. He inwardly said 'reveal' then a status menu appeared.
Anime & Comics · Shen_
Now he just needs a deathnote.
Itachi wanted to try out this new function so he used it on the few kids around him, he was greeted with a dashboard of information. It included their names and realms, where they are from, and all sorts of info.
Anime & Comics · Shen_
A ninja would not make this mistake (exception: naruto).
"Ita- I mean Lin Feng"
Anime & Comics · Shen_
Consider using apostophies: ill and I’ll or well ans we’ll are different.
" Okay well sort out his punishment shortly, " the chief said
Anime & Comics · Shen_
Yeah i agree, i dont think the description is cringe, but the way he responds by calmly saying “next” is though not exactly cringe either, but does feel a little odd. From what i know, Itachi doesnt often speak and as you earlier said his goal was not to beat the kids up, so why instigate them. Sounds like an anime moment.
What these kids didn't know was that the kid in front of them was Uchiha Itachi, the most talented member the legendary Uchiha clan has ever produced, his fighting capabilities were second to none, how could these trifling kids remotely hurt him? Even though Itachi no longer had his old body he still retained all of his memories, that includes his taijutsu… Itachi even had his Sharingan, albeit 1 tomoe but it was still enough to predict their moves.
Anime & Comics · Shen_
Spinning back kick seemes like showing off and would be ineffective if you look at the situation objectively outside of just resding for fun; id say he should have just done a cross.
"Hmph" Ma Bo was getting tired of the talk, hence he rushed at ling Feng and threw the first punch. But to his shock, not only did ling Feng not move but he watched as the fist came swinging at his face, when there was a millimeter of distance Itachi swiftly dodged to the left, and did a spinning back kick right on Ma Bo's face.
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Is this peerless martial god fanfic or something?
Itachi laid there motionless as an influx of memories assaulted his mind, only then did he have a rough idea of who he was and where he was, he had reincarnated into the body of a youth, the name of the youth was Lin Feng, the place he was at was in the outskirts of a remote village in the empire of great tang.
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Was supposed to be *Great demon king* instead of just great king, but oh well.
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Did you just step out of kindergarten? If you think saying that something made me cringe is “borderline”, then you have a great deal of surprises in life ahead of you. Im not gonna waste my time and explain anything to you, you’ll come to realise everything soon yourself; welcome to the internet.
Itachi reincarnated into a cultivation world
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