Well ... my imagination is vast and colourful. Let's dive into it and see what your mind can construct by what you read too
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He tried 馃槄
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well yes lol... she's shocked
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ch 0 5 Chapter Five - Worcestershire Sauce and Background Noise
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Really? I did notice at all lol
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Okay the Foreman's I get dying by yoooooo no Mother and Father!!! That was good. No man left alive, literally.
ch 0 7 Chapter 7 : I want to end it all
Fantasy 路 Bee1429
Maybe a comma between the two "you"
"Well alright, but I'm just looking out for you you know."
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Repetition of "you".
"Well alright, but I'm just looking out for you you know."
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The Spelling is "whether" not "wether". I understand typing error
"I'll speak to her when she arrives to see how far you've gone." Gezelle spoke as she picked up the dishes from the floor. "Then I'll decide wether she gets the boot or not."
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The plot is really really good and the way the author has played around with the story behind story is amazing. It's a slow burn novel and I'm interested in what lies ahead.
Underworld Intern
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