Bibongsensei - Profile

it's good just one or two problems, like the rank,level,stats. in the tournament his opponent was strong , how strong? what is the difference between them?... what is level for? what will happen if he level up?? like it's really useless or not needed is the novel...and the stats, like when you add 1 stat to strength how much does it add?like how strong? and every 10 stats the price of stats will increase by 20, so what is the difference between 10,20,30,40 and so on stats number?... and lastly the name of the mc.. like shye? how do i read that? shey?she?gay? it's quite confusing to read if you're a fast reader sometimes you'll mistake it as "she"... that's all 5⭐👍✨✨🌟

gender changes? like girl becomes a boy?gender bender? or a girl who dress like a boy or something?

the title extra's pov yet his not even an extra, his just an outcast loser who proves himself as a loser by not showing his skills....and again "extra's POV" why not change it to "everyone's POV".• writting quality =4⭐ =👍• story development =4⭐ =👍• character design ⭐=why? bcs characters or the students are so bland ... instead of thinking what to do or worrying for their situation,future, they still worry about having school days again . no normal people will think about that in that kind of situation...and they're talking behind someone else back and that someone is the 2nd strongest classmate based on their knowledge.. instead of curry favour to her, they still have gals to talk at her back. they should have just worry abt their weakselves.. etc• updating stability =4⭐=👍• world background 2⭐= its bcs of class, what is benefits of class? faster lvl up? like how fast?is it only that?and why are they so fixated in class?when skill defines how strong u are?...and the stats, 1 stat point is equal to what? like 10 stat pointa is equal to a adult or something similar to that.... my is english s bad so ii really cant write what im thinking

writting quality is 5 ⭐and everything is average.first, it was a good concept like a berserker type but not properly executed.. like he said "w0w" but his angry meter rise up.. he nervous bcs he met a villainess yet it still rise up...then there's time that his angry meter suddenly rise up without reason....secondly, is this type of concept(berserker/angry) is not synchronized with mc's POV bcs his angry yet he still explaining what's happening around him and to himself and doesn't really shows that his angry... it would be better if it's author POV or neutral POV or what u call that ..idkthirdly, the woman in the harem is like"OHH 😯 YOU SAVED ME! I WILL GIVE YOU MY VIRGINITY THEN! OHHH 😮 YOU'RE HAVING SEX?LET ME JOIN THEN BCS HE SAVED ME!🤷lastly, why did he have to kill alicia?? for the plot to get the protagonist to target someone?? if its for that then he didn't need to kill alicia!! bcs the moment he is attack by the villain his already dead and the the one backing him bcs the protagonist will do that.no!! everyone will do that!! your gf is targeted and u wouldn't help her? and it's your fault why is she targeted. that's why the protagonist will target them so killing her doesn't really help or anything.. and mc said that before that happen that she was only there to die and fuel his anger, thus leading him to the next arcs then after that everything will go back like nothing happened... arghhh

the story have lots of plot holes..like the ice dragon, the mc killed her kin yet she thinks that the mc is different from others?like what he kill your kin!! ripped your wings!!just because he let you live?? live like a prisoner? from just the few interaction it was a force romance..and there's that trauma who only appear after 3years or more...and he got ntr'ed by his girlfriend... there's a lot more but i cant really explain, so you can just read it..this is only my pov of the story, sadly but it's not fo me