Ok this is way too similar to Under The Oak Tree. The abused girl from rich family with a stutter marries a man right after their wedding night. He comes back 2 years later… even the same miscommunications.
Killorn didn't understand how this spoiled daughter with royal blood running through her veins would be this scared of life. She had everything in the world. What was there to be frightened by?
Fantasy · Xincerely
No, the author was correct.
"So, you went to the alley, I told you?" She asked, starting up a conversation after walking in comfortable silence since the penthouse.
Fantasy · Kelly_Starrz
She
'There was no use complaining when he was already married to the man.'
Fantasy · Parisian_Moon
😂
"I hate him!" Luna announced loudly as she swore, throwing the first thing she could grab to the wall. "The Vampire King is a vile, gluttonous, evil creature, and I hope his prick snap into two, and he dies from too much fornication."
Fantasy · Parisian_Moon
*I wonder what this tastes like*
"I wondered how this tastes like," Luna said to no one in particular.
Fantasy · Parisian_Moon
His *silent* judgement
His silence judgment terrified her more than any bellow of rage.
Fantasy · Parisian_Moon
All Luna could hear *was her* heartbeat pounding.
All Luna could hear heartbeat pounding.
Fantasy · Parisian_Moon
To face what?
She felt like she was about to face.
Fantasy · Parisian_Moon
I can hear you but I *can’t* wake up
'I am here, my soul trapped in my own body. I can hear you but I couldn't wake up.'
Fantasy · Parisian_Moon
Placing her hand over *his* chest
Placing her hand over her chest, she checked if his heart was still beating.
Fantasy · Parisian_Moon
I thought she was clamped onto Luxen?
She felt Ravin growing in size, getting larger and larger as he bellowed with fury, and she clamped on to him desperately.
Fantasy · Parisian_Moon
I dont understand this part. Why is it bad he got inside the devils trap. Wasn’t the whole thing messed up already because she was trapped under Raven? Im confused
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Fantasy · Parisian_Moon
Who is she? You mean he! Cedric or Fei?
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Fantasy · Parisian_Moon
Do you mean dagger-like claws?
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Fantasy · Parisian_Moon
Didnt Cedric have blond hair?
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Fantasy · Parisian_Moon
I really enjoyed reading this at first.. but then I realized I got bored and couldn’t continue. The story development is SO SLOW and just felt like it was dragging. The way the kids were written was also frustrating because they were overprotective for far too long - it just got boring.
CEO's Runaway Mate and Her Cubs
Urban · xiaohai_23