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Yes, you are right. I will fix it.
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Battle Through the Heavens: God of Elements
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Thank you for your support.
ch 23 First Encounter with Yun Yun
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Yes, I have fixed all chapter 3 naming spelling mistakes. Thanks for informing me.
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Well, I like both of them as well. It's fine for me until story is interesting.
I honestly like both, but I do like my world-building.
In Danmachi with Plasmids
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Man, just take rest. Your health is more important than a book. Atleast I can wait few days for new chapters.
That's all friends, good day to you all.
In Danmachi with Plasmids
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That's a good idea, I 'll thik about it.
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I am writing new chapter do you have any suggestions?
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This is good idea, I'll think how I will apply this in the story, but it can be somewhat different ok?
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Does he even need to get to that op, i mean this world is not so powerful compare to some other abruptly power ups worlds like Naruto, dragon ball, or bleach etc. If I decide to go to multiverse than maybe I consider you opinion, for this world mc just need to get powerfull enought to save people close to him.
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Well, this is your story so you know better than me, but story is going pretty good for now.
ch 90 A small discussion
In Danmachi with Plasmids
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Thank you for the warning, I appreciate it.
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It doesn't matter, I'm writing this story for my own satisfaction.
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It's obviously about system states, it takes more time for people to build strength, and he is just 5 years old, so it is even more difficult for him to get stronger. But the system helps him to cross that boundary and decreases the time to accumulate strength.
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So, I want to clarify why he decided to save her family. for example, if you have a crush on someone and you know that her family is going to get massacred, and you decided that it is best to let them die, so she will love and get depended on him even if it makes her sad that her family got killed. I mean it won't be love anymore, he is just selfish or he just wants her body or something, if you're not ready to sacrifice something for the one you love then it really is not love. Well, that's why I decided maybe he should try to save them for Mikasa's sake. Hope you like my answer if you have any such quires I will try my best to answer, well, in the end, I am just a new author who's trying to get better at writing by creating fan fics, so it is possible I can make mistake so inform me if you find one I'll try my best to fix that mistake and make sure not to repeat it in the future.
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Well, After that I did change story a bit to make more sense. give it a try maybe you like it better.
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well, I plan to keep her alive for now, so don't worry.
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Well in the original work Wikipedia it was given as both gold and metal. But I'll admit gold sounds much better.
"I'm of the metal attribute now, but it doesn't mean I'll always have only that attribute," Lu Yunxiao shrugged, smiling.
Battle Through the Heavens: God of Elements
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