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Kaeesah

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Reading lots of books and also trying my best to make one as well!

2022-02-08 Joined Brazil

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Kakashi's current appearance should be the one when he is 14 years old. I envisioned this image of him while writing the chapter (The Kakashi on the right).

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The young man wore a dark blue mask that only covered his lower face. His grey hair color stood as one of his most distinct features while his headband extended from his forehead to his left eye.

Naruto : The Stormbringer

Naruto : The Stormbringer

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Thanks for the suggestion! You came in clutch! I rewatched the classic Naruto series and was thinking of something along those lines when watching the Rasengan training again. Those episodes are such a gem for writers to strengthen their characters on chakra manipulation and Ninjutsu xD

Going to his room, Raijin thought of what had transpired since his arrival in this world. He had met a Jōnin and asked for her teaching, was attacked by an unknown man who looked weird, and went into a crisis thinking that he was in an alternate universe of Naruto.

Naruto : The Stormbringer

Naruto : The Stormbringer

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Thanks for the suggestion! I was thinking of some of these, but you gave me great ideas as well.

'Still, I am still a bit salty for not being able to be trained by a Jōnin from right off the bat. It seems that I'll have to go the traditional route of training by myself for this time.' While thinking this, he experienced a feeling of tiredness. Observing two other boys already sleeping on their futons, he began getting ready to sleep by taking a short bath and quickly going to his bed.

Naruto : The Stormbringer

Naruto : The Stormbringer

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First, let me say this upfront: if you're used to the standard Naruto fanfiction fare, get ready for a change. A quick glance at the other reviews will confirm this for you—there's been a bit of a mixed reaction, to put it mildly. Imagine finding yourself thrust out of your own life into a whole new body, a new routine, new faces—all for no apparent reason. And to top it off, you're set down right into the middle of some sort of super soldier school, a place where everyone else seems to know the ropes, but you're just trying not to trip over them. Being honest to myself, if I were in their shoes, I'd be more than just a little stressed—probably an understatement, frankly. Now, wipe any thoughts of a Gary Stu protagonist from your mind because that's not what you're getting here. Our main character isn't some pre-packaged prodigy. This guy isn't used to threading a needle, let alone weaving intricate jutsu. He's the poster child for ordinary, and you're supposed to feel it. The man works his ass for every bit of progress he makes. He was a sheltered college kid before all this craziness, for god's sake. One of the most interesting things about this fic is how it brings depth and builds upon the Naruto universe. It delves into the inner conflicts brewing within the village, painting them in a way that fits seemingly perfectly with the original work. And let's not forget those third-person insights from the original characters—they're like little puzzle pieces that sometimes involve our protagonist, and sometimes just add to the chaos of Konoha. Now, let's talk about the supporting cast. These side characters aren't just placeholders. They're developed, not to the point of overkill (we've all had our fill of that), but with enough substance to engage us without overwhelming the plot. You won't find yourself pulled out of the story due to some sudden nonsensical moment or dialogue. The author keeps things grounded, logical, and satisfyingly real. Also, there's no sudden turn into Xianxia or Wuxia territory. If you've been put off by those shifts before, you're safe here. But here's the thing, a little heads-up: this story might touch on some sensitive topics. Don't worry, though, the author handles them with enough sensitivity, so that no one is left uncomfortable.

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